Reet3103

Hey. Great job. And being an Indian, I understand the mentality used here. When rape victims aren't respected and are mostly disowned by the society. It's a cheap mentality, and ...

Hey there. I really enjoyed this piece of perfection :) really it was amazing. I liked the concept here, how you made it sound so realistic. I found a few ...

Hey. I really really enjoyed this composition of yours. And honestly, the title caught my attention. I mean, what exactly would be "an ideal suicide" for anyone. I had a ...

Hey. Oh my god, I love love love love love this! There are many gay people in my school too, and even I don't find anything wrong with it. Your ...

Hey. "I could now hear distinct," Okay so I think this is grammatically incorrect. "These faint sounds still rings in my mind," I think it should be "These faint sounds ...

Woahhhh. I loved thisss :D It was awesome. The concept of C-U-T-T-E-R was great! And even though it was short, it was very expressive. Making something descriptive, that too something ...

Hey. Okay so, I think you need to use proofread or something. Because honestly, it had many mistake which I'm not pointing out right now. They were just typos I ...

Heyy. Okay I understood it was about someone who wants somebody but can't have that person. So what does, "Then I know you'd never go" this signify? If the person ...

Hey. "and I walk trough it in white." here I think you meant "through". Trough means something else. "One timid glance of black eyes" I think it should be "One ...

Hey there. So, I like the concept here. You basically described the position and the ache. Why don't you add something to it? I mean make it more lengthy and ...

Heyyy. Okay so, your poem was really nice. BUT, agreeing with the previous review, "that light I see" repetition doesn't work here at all. Like, it doesn't add to it. ...

Hey. What just happened? Your poetry just won my heart :D "gently, tightly, softly, slowly, tenderly, earnestly,truthfully, patiently,silently,steadily,lovingly,constantly,respectfully,continually,soo

Hey. The first line kind of reminded me of Eminem's Mockingbird xD goes like, "now hush little baby, don't you cry, everything's gonna be alright" Anyways, I liked it. It's ...

Hey. Signing in to review. Firstly, rain is NOT bad for pregnant ladies. Secondly, "She was the daughter in law of a farmer family." I think it should be "She ...

Hey. "There was no children playing at the playground anymore." I think you meant "There were no children playing in the playground anymore." " He took his motorcycle and ride ...