Reebz

You portrayed the ballerina as an incredibly elegant dancer and it seems like you've effortlessly written a really good poem. :)

Well there's been enough critique ^ I enjoyed it, keep writing!

Awh, this is what I think of music too. ^.^ Keep writing and I'm sure you'll improve even further. :)

Peas?! Haha. Loved it, honestly. :D

Putting the spelling errors aside, really loved it. :D

Wow. Writing technique is amazing. Thoroughly enjoyed reading. :)

Quite a mood-changing poem. But considering you wrote it on the spot, it was well-written. :)

Ever thought of life coaching? Haha. :P Although I amn't the suicidal kind, this'd definitely make me think twice before doing something drastic. Amazing.

Beautifully written. And I agree completely. :D

I go through this everyday - so I can relate completely. Well-written. :)

A tad short but really good. Enjoyed reading it. :)

It's really good, keep rhyming. ;)

Worth reading. :)

Ooh I get where you're coming from.. I'll edit it a little. Thank you so much for the advice everyone. :)

Woww. Breathtaking, like seriouslyy. :O Loved it. :D