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Re: Memory
I don't think I have anything to criticize on your work, just that, you did very amazing. The poem is so cute, it makes me remember a movie scene where ...
Dec 24, 2019 -
Re: On Love
Woow, this is so cute As crazy as it might sound reading it reminded me of John Donne's the sun rising. The imagery I got when reading this was so ...
Dec 24, 2019 -
Re: Trashy Hotel Room
Great Piece. This poem made me realize how I fail to appreciate and overlook somethings I regard as little in this world which is so not right, because these 'little' ...
Dec 24, 2019 -
Re: What Is Christmas All About?
The last line had me rolling in laughter. lol,Christmas is indeed about the gingerbread cookies. This poem is nice. Every question asked in each stanza had me thinking and wondering ...
Dec 24, 2019 -
Re: Anxiety
"Everybody bleeds" I like the way this last line of the poem hits me. This is a nice poem, good job on portraying something very realistic in such few words. ...
Dec 22, 2019 -
Re: XxAaliyahxX
I like the sharp turn of event the story's plot takes.I understand the boy to be honest, and also feel sorry for him. I have never been in such a ...
Dec 14, 2019 -
Re: Procrastination
I swear this will be the procrastinator's anthem for procrastinator's such as myself. It is funny how you vividly portrayed that feeling of procrastination. Every line was on point. I ...
Dec 13, 2019 -
Re: Pain
Yeesh, this is very accurate and sad. You were able to say a lot using just a few words and that is very good. I just hope you are ok. ...
Dec 13, 2019 -
Re: didn't you know i'd miss you
Wow you song is nice, from your melody, to the voice, the guitar and most of all the lyrics. Even though the lyrics are sad, it is a very beautiful ...
Dec 13, 2019 -
Re: My Kindness
Ok first off, why have planned on making me cry this morning? Damn the poem hurts so much and that's what makes me love it the most. This is very ...
Dec 13, 2019 -
Re: Empty, Silent, and lost
hi, This poem is beautiful but so sad. It has this tone like the persona is kind of depressed. In the first stanza, i got a little bit confused by ...
Dec 13, 2019
