Ok first off, why have planned on making me cry this morning? Damn the poem hurts so much and that's what makes me love it the most. This is very good, sad, poem.
I like the pattern of rhymes in the poem. Honestly, I need to come for tutorials so you can show me how you do it. I hope you don't mind though? lol.
The early parts of the poem, from you stating how your kindness is your weakness, giving in your all in a relationship because of how much you really loved the person, that to me shows me how beautiful your strength is. It really hurts to be in a situation where you put in your all, your love, affection and time to make a relationship work, only for it to be stepped on. That is a feeling I would hate to go through and wouldn't love for any person to go through such pain.
"Ignorance was bliss that day
They don’t know the hurt
I experienced that day
I begged for one last kiss
As I was crying into your shirt
You just walked away"
this part to be honest really undid me. Yet I love the way you realistically portrayed how heartless some people can be. It really made my heart break.
I love how the persona realizes how good on their own they feel toward s the end of the poem. Even though that heartbreak wasn't the best way to discover this kind of self love, it is as if the persona is saying, although you almost killed me by making me go through that terrible heartbreak, Thank you for if it hadn't have happened, I would never have known how good I can be on my own.
The last stanza once again shows the persona's strength which is the kindness.m I mean were I to have been the one who went through that heartbreak, I would have loved to see the person in pain, but no. The persona actually recognizes hoe happy they are, and wish that their number one heartbreaker is also happy.
If this Kindness is not the persona's beautiful strength, then tell me, what is it then?
Amazing poem. I love, I love it. I. FREAKIN'. LOVE.IT
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