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Re: You don't know and you won't know until it's over...
Lol, I like this one. I don't know why but I do. I've thought about this sometimes. Why am I here? As a Christian I know and believe it's because ...
Apr 28, 2015 -
Re: Stoneslide - Chapter 14
I like the concept here of using animals as characters. I have to go back and re-read this and your other works now. I'm no good at writing adventure and ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution: Through The Middle, Episode 2: Amends
Is this actually Pokemon? Sorry, I couldn't follow but then again I've never been a fan of Pokemon so I wouldn't have been able to tell anyways. It's good. I ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Burnout
I like this one. It isn't very poetic though. The format is awkward too. I like how it seems so big, like a whole new world, but its really a ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Perdita
Losing someone is your heart aching in your chest. Not for a moment but for years and years, that you adorable, that you never realized you could miss. Oh, I ...
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: An Ode to Google
Haha I love this. Google is truly in debt to you and your praise. Cute. Very cute. I'm a big fan of google myswlf(yahoo and bing just aren't good enough ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: This is our land
I liked it a lot. Way to be a voice and get out there. I don't know much about South Africa as an American and I think most Americans don't ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: Clarity
My allergies are as follows: dogs, cats, rabbits, birds, spores,mold,dust,perfume,cologne,scented detergent,scented candles,certain shampoos,certain scented hair products,flowers,chocolate(slightly),
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: Fireworks On Skin
Grammar time! All lines in poetry are to be capitalized and none of yours were. i've needs to be changed to I've and the third paragraph line six don't post ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: Nothing
Brilliantly done. I liked it a lot. Very nice. However I noticed you didn't capitalize 'God'.... as a basic rule of grammar all words pertaining to God and God are ...
Apr 17, 2015 -
Re: Nebraska's Beauty
This seemed awkward and painful to read. No offense. But it sounded like a tourist add and not like a poem from the heart. When you said Nebraska's beauty I ...
Apr 16, 2015 -
Re: Human
This, no offense,predictable and already been said before. Now, delve further into detail and explanation. Explain the pain we take as burdens and the pain we naturally carry as our ...
Apr 16, 2015 -
Re: Fear
I liked it. I have some of these fears,among others, *cough *heights*big horses*cough cough*, anyways. I will say, some lines rhymned and some didn't, you have every right to write ...
Apr 15, 2015 -
Re: unconventionaL
Can I just say Well Done? E. E. Cummings is my favorite poet, he didn't believe in rhyming,punctuation or capitalization. Instead he just let the words flow and he wrote ...
Apr 14, 2015 -
Re: My Best Friend is Gay.
You won't like my opinion and it'll receive negative comments anyway, which is not what this website is for... maybe. We'll get to my opinion at the end of this ...
Apr 13, 2015
