RebelWriter

Very interesting poem, I like it, a lot different from the usual poem we read with rhymes and a light and cheery atmosphere. Grammar issues: In the third line you ...

Nice, I liked it quite a bit. I love how this poem is not like the common poems that rhyme and talk about light and cheery things. While those poems ...

Such creative designs to these poems, I love it all! This poem made me chuckle since all my friends are four to eight years older than me and remember things ...

Let me just say that I love how it looks. That's so creative and so cool how you did that, and I think it really helps to bring this poem ...

Welll, now. This was......interesting, a wee bit smelly and gross,,, but intersting. I like the fact that everyone is branching out their poetry and writing something outside of dreary tales ...

Haha way to vent. It was interesting, I liked the rhyme scheme and the hunor. She must be rather annoying if she makes Donald look like a saint. I found ...

Cause honey, whatever you have, I'll want the opposire. Oh, I love this poem. It is sooo me. The rhyme is beautiful and the humor is a brilliant add. I've ...

This isn't exactly a story, more like a report of events that took place. If that was your aim then brilliant job. I don't get in to scify,so don't get ...

First, may I comment you for your ability to have a dialogue. I cannot master the dialogue aspect of stories. It's impossible for me to do. I like Akia and ...

I dont know the background of what's going on, why she was captive, who Rhys is and the warriors,but that's just because I haven't read the previous chapters. The scene ...

Good plot,i like it. You moved too fast between characters though, I want to get to know each one as a reader. I like that the characters are animals, creative ...

Sigh. Another beautiful poem, I can't write poetry but I enjoy reading it. This was beautiful, I like the personifications given to the leaves and Rose, very fitting as the ...

I LOVE THIS POEM!!! So many girls who think without makeup and fake bodies and hair they aren't beautiful, well, its a sad lie being spread around. This poem is ...

Ahh! Not the voice! Haha. Nice job here on this one. It begins with the bothersome voice that gets to us all at times, torturing us with its constant lies, ...

I liked the metaphor here and the lyrical repitition of some words, very nice. Even though I'm no poet I really like metaphors so this had me hooked. Also like ...