Rayneisthename

I liked this story a lot, there was just confusion due to the choice of your words. In the third paragraph why would Daniel call his granddad the old man? ...

I like this poem and especially this line: If the flow of poetry hadn’t been real It explains why the flow of the poem just stopped and I also think ...

uhhhhhhh. This is so confusing (and I'm being honest here) that I can't even put it into words. In the beginning there is no flow at all and then it ...

Wow this is really good. I loved the twist at the ending but like Confetti said I would take out the 'cause' because it ruins the dramatics at the end. ...

This was very good! I liked all the things you described and I can relate to this too. My ex-best friend did this to me two years ago and I ...

I always meant to review this peom but never got around too it! This is wonderful and it has a lot of feeling in it. I really like the entire ...

I liked this poem a lot, it had a few flaws though..... But being popular is more important to you, I suppose. But why must you be so ignorant, only ...

This was a very bouncy-fun poem to read! I loved everything! Death said, “In order to be free, I would have something to lose,” These lines are kind of confusing, ...

I loved this because it has sort of a hidden meaning to it. I think we all want to run away sometimes and this is exactly how I would picture ...

This is abit confusing when it gets to the second stanza, like you didn't know exactly what to do next. In the second stanza all of a sudden you start ...

I really love this poem!!!! I love the entire theme and rhyming scheme (no rhyme intended). The imagery you have in your writing is just amazing! This review probably isn't ...

I really liked this poem!! I liked the rhyming scheme, it wasn't overwhelming, it was subtle. Something to say: I feel really bad for the girl, I could feel her ...

Hahaha, I like this poem a lot!!! :) Everything you said here is true! I feel exactly like that right now! But agreeing with Sionarama, the last line is a ...

This was a really good poem! Ironically, I actually was going to write about comparing myself to a snowflake....But anyway, very well done. You used descriptive words making the poem ...

This was a very good poem! In the last couple of stanzas it got a little depressing though(unless I am deciphering it wrong), I thought it would have a more ...