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Hi! Thank you so much for requesting a review! I think this poem is beautifully written! The only thing I can see is that the rhyme of this poem feels ...

HEY! This was epic! A casual read that fired me up! I really have no complaints here, except maybe add a comma at the end of step one and step ...

Hi! I. Am. In. Love. With. This! I think you executed this perfectly. The last four lines are magically and dream crushing. The whole time I read it, I thought ...

Hi! This is fascinating! I love all of the imagery and detail you have packed into this short poem. It was almost like a short story told in so few ...

Hi! I love the imagery and detail in this brief poem! You make this world within our emails, chats, internet come to life. The only thing I would change would ...

Hi! While reading this as a poem, I was definitely thinking how amazing this would be as a song, then I re-read the title and realized it is a song ...

Hi! I'm so sorry if this is something you are going through. Just know that I can personally relate to each and every one of these stanzas, and if you ...

Hi! This was short, sweet, and relatable! In the beginning of my review, I'll go over some grammar mistakes that i noticed that would improve the flow and read of ...

Wow. I am in awe of this utopian world you have created. You added just enough detail to keep me enthralled and able to create my own mind movie all ...

Nice. I'm not sure what this intended to be, but I absolutely adore all the descriptions going on in this piece! This is a beautiful scene, and maybe later on ...

Hey! This is lovely! It draws me in and keeps me intrigued until the very last line. I love how you have combined punctuation into this poem. There are a ...

Wow. This story is full of reminiscing and beauty. You definitely pulled me in, and I couldn't quit reading until the end! There's really only ing thing I would change: ...

Wow. I love the simplicity of this poem, but it's amazing message is like a pow to the heart. There's really only one thing I would change: almost all of ...

Wow, How beautiful is this?! This makes you think about all those close chance encounters that could have turned into something amazing. Just a few edits would make this a ...

Hi! So I definitely have to go back and read the other chapters of this amazing novel now! I don't have much criticism because I have only read the fourth ...