Rainn

This is great! I love the strong image, I can really see it. The feel of this poem is so...amazing. I love that how in 8 lines, you take me ...

Not much to say here at all. Sorry. If anything, I've always been one for punctuation at the end of lines. Without it it feels halting and abrupt, almost. Your ...

Hey there! This is beautiful. I love the vivid imagery and beautiful wording. "and bare feet balanced on the dirt ground." This was wonderful. I don't know why, but I ...

Next chapter please? :D I love this. I feel pulled through the chapters, compelled to finish, and unable to stop even though my mother is calling me. Hehe. Not much ...

Sweet, simple, thoughtful. I like it. At first, I thought it would be another poem about cutting. But this was a nice and refreshing change. I was happy, this is ...

Great work here. I like how you gradually get from stage to stage. I, personally, like the way you wrapped it up with repeating the first stanza at the end. ...

This is a beautiful poem. So much emotion. I find it interesting that it goes along with the books I am currently reading. I'm not a fan of the "*"'s ...

I really liked this poem, and can feel it well. Although, your rhyming seems off. Lines 1 through 10 are great, ending in an A-A B-B C-C type form. But ...

I like how you proclaim your faith, and you are open about it. Very nice. I also like the idea of this poem, it reminds me of some songs I ...

I really like this. The repetition is nice, I assume this was meant for emphasizing purposes. There are no grammatical or spelling errors. Everything flows very nicely, nothing seems out ...

Nice imagery here! Very enjoyable read. Although, I would love to see this in stanzas. To me it felt slightly like it drones some, but I believe that feeling would ...

Oh wow. I recommend you put a mature content warning on this. Please. Okay, now to the review. First, I will tell you what I loved about this poem. Great ...

I like the length, not to long or short. Your rhyming scheme seems off, though. You have a nice pattern in lines 1 through 4, then you go to "doubt" ...

I think this is a great poem. It is emotional, and I like that. I can understand the feel behind this. I absolutely love the ending, it is awesome. "i ...

The beginning of the poem caught me. I liked it. It is very much in tune to how I...think. It has great imagery and flows nicely. But there is one ...