Raindeer

Hello! c: Hmm, so is it just me, or did this chapter have more errors than the past one? It would be a good idea to go back a edit ...

Hi, there! I loved the metaphor, here, with the flowers and seasons representing people and life. It was simply beautiful. I loved the song, too, except a couple of likes ...

Hello, again! So, nice new chapter! Let's get this review on! :D I realized this while reading the chapter - is this in planet earth? Because having a mix of ...

Hello- This was a great way to express your feelings. :D And I'm sure we can ALL relate. Just be sure, though, about rhyming. To be honest with you, it ...

Hi! Really short review here. Oh well. >.< So, wow! I loved this. It was short, but right to the point and I absolutely love that. :D The only suggestion ...

Hello! Okay - I'm here for a quick review. So, I though this was a very clever little piece. It reminds me of something we did in history a while ...

Hi, there! I really enjoyed this read. It was engaging, entertaining, and not boring the whole way through. There is some things you could improve on, however. This is obviously ...

Hi, there! Bloodsrain pretty much covered the basic criticism to this chapter. Really, when I read the first line of this, I mentally groaned. 'U' and 'r' are more of ...

Hello, there. Well, I'm going to hae to agree with Adrian on this one. I dislike dream starts. The first reason? Cliché. Second? It almost just seems like a filler, ...

Hi, there! I haven't read your previous chapters, but I noticed this had no reviews, so I'm going to give it a shot. So. Wow, I loved your description. You ...

Hi there. I thought this was a nice poem - and procrastination! Ah! We can all relate, so this is an excellent relation-y poem. I also loved the repetition of ...

Hi, there! You had an awesome plot to this story! I could also tell you did your research - there were clearly some facts about imperial China in here. Awesome ...

Hello! Wow, this is so interesting! I loved it. What I liked was you had a constant story going PLUS this challenge. And you didn't fall off track from your ...

Hi, there. So, there were several aspects to this story that just made me cringe. There were some parts that were fantastic, though! All right, let's begin! 1) The start ...

Hi! I'm going to start this review with nitpicks. So we shall start! you blocked me with your golden mansions 'Golden' is used previously in the poem; I would suggest ...