Raindeer

Heya!! Here to review. This is an interesting piece from your story you have here. Just a recommendation, though: next time you can just make this a wall post or ...

Hey, Sunny!! Rainy here for a quick review. This piece was really cute, and, very, very relatable. I mean - everyone here is a writer (if not a writer, then ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS. I hope you enjoy your stay :) This is a nice little essay you have here. It's very meaningful and has a strong point. However ...

Hey there! Here to review. So, before I get into the real meat of the review, I'm going to tell you something about commas. AFTER A COMMA: put a space ...

Hello there! This was a nice piece, although I must admit, it does need some work. It wasn't boring and it had it's own appeal to it. It's like an ...

Heyo! Welcome to the website! I hope you enjoy your stay here. :) First of all - I think this belongs more in a club than a writing post. For ...

Hello! First, to start this review off, I'm just going to point out a nitpick: We have Review Days on last Suundays of every month. I think you meant Sunday. ...

Hello! Here to review. I think you could've worked on a more hooking start; the prologue wasn't neccasarily hooking, but neither was the first part. Make an interesting start to ...

Ooh, this was so beautiful. Your style (lack of capitalization, mostly) added such an amazing effect (affect? Bah) to the poem that just made it 'pop' out more. you’re connected ...

Hey! EternalRain here to drop by and leave a quick review! Your love for winter was expressed nicely in this poem, it was short, sweet, and straight to the point. ...

Hi! I really enjoyed this piece, so I thought I'd stop by and leave a review. This is such an inspirational poem, and it's beautiful at the same time. The ...

Hello! Happy Review Day! This work has been sitting in the Green Room for forever.... tsk tsk (not to you, of course :P) I have one nitpick to point out; ...

Hello! Happy Review Day! EternalRain here for a short review! First off, man, I love your character already. I don't know why. She just seems spunky and awesome, but such ...

Hello! EternalRain here for a short review. I wan to start this off by saying I haven't read your previous chapters. However, I get what's going on, and that's great. ...

Hello! EternalRain here to drop by and give you a short review. I like it so far - although somewhat short (quality over quantity, though, always ;)) it was a ...