Raelyn

Review. So as a theatre gal my first way to analyze this is to imagine playing either of these characters. I must it would be a lot of fun. It ...

WOW, this hit me hard. I really felt like I got punched in the gut with how powerful this was. You really talk about some deep topics. I love the ...

yes, I agree poems are a great way to dump your feelings:) I do the same thing! Now about your poem! I really like this because it was almost like ...

wow, the imagery here is mind-blowing. I really love this poem because it really warms my helpless romantic heart. I really liked the line: then heaven may yet surprise me, ...

In this review I did a lot more nitpicking you call it. Hope it helps. You already know I adore you and your writing so I say all this to ...

My old pal Everlight! Here to give some praise and suggestions:) Let the reviewing commence!! So I really love this introduction! It really sets the tone for this beautiful alluring ...

“Mom, you’re not going to die. I can’t live alone! I’m sixteen for heaven’s sake, you can’t leave me!”- this was my breaking point. I am to tears from the ...

There was some initial confusion, on who was narrating, but I figured it out. So is this going to be in 3rd person every time that Katie isn't narrating? I ...

Your creativity continues to amaze me. "You're bloody sixteen years old. It's still young love."- he he ha ha ha😂 I loved this so much. We love a sassy cranky ...

Okay here is your next chapter review. Well darn it, now I am confused about how to fell about Nathan. I love how this is right on the edge of ...

And so the drama begins:) You do a nice job of making your book interactive for your reader. It feels like she is talking to us, yet we know she ...

Whaaaaaatttt? I I barely have words. This makes me think of twilight, throne of glass, and vampire diaries all at the same time. I know I said I was hooked ...

Dang! You are a literal queen! You had me totally hooked by the first paragraph. I especially loved your line:”I decided to go for a walk on the outskirts of ...

Hello! I just wanted to say I really enjoyed reading this poem. I love how you took one simple topic like fall and let it grow into this beautiful piece ...

I really love the recurring theme of memories of you. My favorite line in your poem is: Crushed roses leave The scent of perfume; Memories are lasting - Memories of ...