RachelLeeAnn

Hello, Pompadour! You've written a remarkable piece, here. Your technicalities (such as spelling, grammer, etc.) are spot on. You've done such a good job that there's nothing for me to ...

Hi, Smile! :) While reading this, I imagined the words being placed to a catchy tune. However there were several grammar errors, as pointed out by Aadygirl. I'm not going ...

Hello. I'm having a hard time understanding this poem. I understand that these are the "mad" ravings, of a pseudo-God, so maybe they aren't supposed to be coherent, but I ...

Hello there! I enjoyed this. It's a little obscure, for lack of a better word. You've managed to make people think really hard about what they're reading. Correct me if ...

Hello there! I really like this story! It's got me wanting more. There were a couple sentences that I feel need to be restructured. This is just my opinion on ...

Hello, there! I keep re-reading this, trying to find something wrong with it to review. I've come to the conclusion that there isn't anything to fix! This is a really ...

The words "writer's block" scream at me when reading this! I really like this! Only thing that stood out: maybe i'm just tired, terribly tired. it's a weird kind of ...

Hello! I quite like this. There wasn't much I saw that need fixing! I would have loved for it to be a bit longer of a poem, but then again, ...

Hello :) Let me start by saying that I think this poem has GREAT potential. I do think it needs some work, though. Let's start with the grammatical side. :) ...

Hello! :) I really like the idea you have behind this poem- that general sense of wonder when it comes to getting over someone. Wondering what it is specifically that ...

Though this is sad, it's very lovely. It's written in a way that we the readers can relate, yet it is still personal to you specifically. Bravo on that. You've ...

I like this a lot. It's easy to see the emotion/passion that has been put into it-- it's obviously a poem that has been written from an experience of yours. ...

This is very beautiful. Honestly, this is poetic perfection. This short poem manages to express the huge amount of love you have for these two little girls. Are these your ...

Hello there! Just a little review: I really like the first 4 sentences; I think they fit well and set up this story nicely. However, I'm having a tough time ...

I have only known you for a short season, and spring is coming, but you left in the night. Ah, this is so very lovely! I only saw one thing ...