Queenie

Hey RippleGylf, It's Queenie here for a review. So, first of all, I loved this poem. I think that you really captured the hope then the disappointment of this girl ...

Hey OreosAreLife, Queenie here for a review. First of all, this is a very lovely poem. I think that it is a good subject since I'm sure many people have ...

Hey AlyssaB506, Queenie here for a review. For starters, I really enjoyed this poem. I think that the description is beautiful, and I also liked how you linked nature to ...

Hey KaraStevens, Queenie here to review your poem. To be honest, I really liked this poem. I think that the message was really good. Also, I think that there are ...

Hey Finderman, it's Queenie here for a review. First of all, this was amazing. I loved all of the emotion and the storyline was also well done. I loved the ...

Hey kimmycat and steam1244, it's Queenie here for a review. I like this poem because it is a good description of someone struggling to live. I also think that the ...

Hey steam1244, Queenie here for a review. Alright for starters, I really liked this poem. I think that it is sending a very good message. Also, it is a poem ...

Hey, Remembrance! Queenie here for a review. I liked your poem a lot, although I do have some suggestions to make it even better. First of all, in the first ...

WOW, I LOVED THIS POEM!!!! Honestly, this is one of the best poems I've read in a while, so good job. I really liked the message that you sent through ...

Hey speakerskat! It's Queenie here to review your poem. I really enjoyed this poem. I liked how you compared people to a flower, and that you used lots of description. ...

Hey speakerskat! It's Queenie here to review your poem. I really like your poem because I think that it was written in a beautiful style. Now for the critiques. I ...

Hi, DameinCyfer! This is Queenie here to review your poem. I really like your poem. My interpretation of it is that you are trying to convince people to live their ...

I like your poem because it is very relatable to many readers. I also like the repetition of the phrase "I'm feeling" because it reinforces the idea of the poem. ...

I love this poem because it is just full of emotion. It's also relatable to readers who've lost a loved one or who have lived their lives without one, which ...

I really like this poem, although I do have a couple of suggestions. First of all, in the line "making pink clouds and pink sky" I recommend to either add ...