I love this poem because it is just full of emotion. It's also relatable to readers who've lost a loved one or who have lived their lives without one, which makes it more touching to the reader and in turn, makes them like it even more. Also, I like how you repeated the line "I want something I cannot have" in the beginning and the end because it is an effective way of communicating your main idea. All in all, I truly believe that this was a very successful poem, and I look forward to reading some of your future works.
Points: 47
Reviews: 45
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