Prakash

Hi, Thumbs up! You have done a great job. I love it. Your picturesque descriptions and the feel are not just great, they are mind-boggling. You are able to deliver ...

Hi Druhi, First, welcome to YWS and thanks for the reading. After a long break, this is my first review. You got a good start for your story. Yet, I ...

Hello Katie, Prakash here for review! Welcome to YWS! I have no idea of the game 400 years, before. But by the way you stated, the seasons fly past and ...

Hello Randy, I am here for the review. The music hits and the wrestlers come out either to a big pop or boo. In the ring, they exchange a cold ...

Hello Madshein, As promised, I am here for review to you. The story is good and interesting. But, the spelling mistakes ruins it. You should read loud two to three ...

Hi Sagnik, Lust is when you love only what you see. And love is when you lust what's inside. 'Love or Lust' is the theme of ages, you can find ...

Hi, I am here to review your work. A close combat story but no adrenaline kicks up, no splutter of gun fires, no bullets cutting through the air and no ...

Hi, I am here to review for you. Welcome you to YWS! The sun is blackening out! The idea is not new but I can see some potential in your ...

Hi, I am here for the review. I guess it is pretty short to be called as a chapter. It has to be of 2000 words and above. To say ...

Hi Happy Review Day! It seemed you had given a very long introduction. The dream at the start and the following events till Zach saw Shastice were like an usual ...

Hi, Your poem is really amazing! I know this statement has become a cliche, but that's the fact. You have done a great job. Who don't wanna fall in love ...

Hi roeckercody! I am here for review. First, I go with the nitpicks: Block off the most important trees, make sure for certain nobody will get near them. I consistently ...

Hi rocky, I am here for the review. In your intro part, you have described the aftermath of war. It is absolutely good. But, my question is "Your story is ...

Hi Madshein, I am here for review. First of all, I think you have to edit your story again. There were a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. I hope ...

Hi Writer, I am back again for the review. It seemed that the story was heading towards a lively romance. In last chapter, you have mentioned that she slipped while ...