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Hi Rhia. For the life of me I will never figure this out, but then again, some poems are not supposed to be, "Figured out." I really like the imagery ...

Hi Fiend. Yes its a review. *Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwnnnnnnnnnn* I would basically say what Aley said, the poem is clear, you keep it in a simple ab12 pattern that switches

It's a review. Mila, I like your poem because it's the exact opposite of what you should do. Carpe Diem! You can't wait for inspiration, you have to go get ...

Here for a review. This is a beautiful work, I love your descriptions and your rhymes. I love how you made the poem the most. It tells a story am ...

Cheetah, this is a very disturbing story, are you okay? I love everything about this story. You say so much about this character. In just one scene, you describe the ...

This is a review. (DON'T HATE) This was a great story up until the end. I'm sorry, but it's just so cliche, it seems like you didn't even try for ...

Hello. I really like this story for the fact thatit's real. That kind of stuff happens in my dreams and whenever I wake up, I know I could've controlled the ...

Hi, Verser here to review. This poem reminds me of Shel Silverstein, professional and beautiful. It feels refreshing to finally read a happy poem for a change, It's easy to ...

Hi, yes it's a review. I really like your rhyming. Even though some of the temo was off in those sentences, it really boosted the poem. Also... it's so dark ...

*catches ladcat and puts him/her in bath* Verser here for a review. To start, I really love the way you rhyme. Personally, I think rhyming is the hardest thing to ...

Hello Deanie. Verser here for a review. I think what I love the most about this poem is that it focuses on a real problem in a real world. People ...

This is Verser reviewing your poem. Windsailor, this is probablly the most generic idea for a poem anyones ever used, but the way you write the poem caught my eye. ...

This is Verser here to review this beautiful piece of artwork. To start, That smile is the one true thing in the world. Everyone has that smile and it has ...

Hello, this is Verser with a review for this melancholy, yet beautiful poem. (I think it's going to be short) ...What can I say? This poem is absolutely beautiful, from ...

This is Verser here for my 2nd review (again, dont hate) Cheetah, I think this ones going to be short. The best part about this Haiku is it explains SO ...