Pompadour

Yummy, yummy imagery here, Night! I'm an especial fan of the second-to-last stanza because who doesn't like some flighty imagery? It also reminds me of this scene from this movie, ...

Welcome to YWS! Let's talk poetry, friend. c: I'm not a big fan of the rhyming; it feels kind of forced and I think this piece would fare better without ...

Hey, Gravity~ I'll spare you the preamble; let's get to business. As is always the case with poems that talk about depression, I'm never sure if the piece is written ...

Yo, Anci~ So I read this a while ago and thought I'd drop by to see if I could catch an update; I was surprised to see that this hasn't ...

Hey there~ I like how you don't stray from sea-like images throughout this piece. This is good because it helps you establish a constant in your poetry, and also makes ...

Howza~ Happy Review Day! Gonna make this quick. I could feel Eugene’s eyes taking in my movements as I opened draws and lifted papers... I think you mean 'drawers' here, ...

Hey~ I'm a little rough on reviewing, but I've been keeping up with this and have actually read it all the way through , so I thought I'd pay a ...

Hey there~ I see that this is on the spotlight--congratulations! Also, welcome to YWS. ^^ I'm going to make this review short. I didn't particularly like the way you wrote ...

Heyo, Scar! ^_^ Here for a quick review~ So there's not much for me to say here, since my sense of poetry is mostly guided by how well images form ...

Here as promised!

I AM HERE. *flails* Also, I'm on a phone and felt like reviewing anyway (despite the many typos I know I will end up making) so yeah. Aaand because I ...

Hey, anshira~ Popping by for a quick review. So, I'll be honest, I didn't particularly like the way you wrote this. The idea is a nice one, but somehow it ...

Hey, Wise~ Happy Review Day! I am back--after a long time, jeesh--to review! I didn't really like the way you began this, because even though it's linking the end of ...

Hezzo, hezzo! Happy Review Day! I shall get to the mucky businesses right away: that beginning and I do not agree. But then again, I'm very fussy about beginnings, so ...

Oh, hai. I'm going to drop a quick review on this one. :mrgreen: So I felt like the main issue in the piece was the fact that the entirety of ...