PoeticCowboy

Hello from the top to mid morning of the day! Wait, that was a Lame starter. Ok, how's this one, Hello, top of the day to you! Me thinks that's ...

First things first, I want to say congrats on stealing my attention with the title that you put up. It was like somebody was sitting next to me telling me, ...

Ok, this gave me shivers down my spine, really really bad. But they were good shivers because I really like the poem. My most chilling parts: "A white hand curled ...

I liked the poem and all of the stanza's fit together and made perfect sense. All of them but this one. "Zombie walking my way from bed was hard enough, ...

MemoryHunter, I think that your poem was good, but the one thing that was confusing for me and was a turnoff was the way that you listed long sentences. Instead ...

I love these song lyrics blueRaven2239! I can relate this to some of my friends, they feel the same way. I was the only one that actually did not think ...

Holy moley, guacamole! This is good. I mean seriously!! What I love: I love that you are able to use the words that you did and make them bold and ...

Ok, I am officially in love with this poem. The only things I would change is the length of the poem, but the way it is written, it works well ...

This is one of the greatest first chapters that I have ever read since reading tons and tons and mountains of books. Great Job!!!! There are just little things that ...

XD XD XD, lol lol! I am laughing so hard. Also giggling. Ummm.......... I don't know how to respond to this because I am laughing so hard I can hardly ...

Super great job TMWoods!! I am in awe of your work. The first part where you have Alice falling down and the White Rabbit, that kind of confused me because ...

I liked the poem, but it was confusing to me and I lost the theme of it towards the end. I liked the rhythm of the poem and the fast ...

Ok, I just have to say that I 100% love this poem and it made me sad and happy and warm and fuzzy inside all at the same time. I ...

Great job TMWoods! I could see the setting of the poem and everything. The first part of the poem was kind of creepy, but I like creepy so I am ...

This is a good story that you have going to far and I like it. The title of the book kind of threw me off and attracted me to this ...