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Re: Grey Souls
Hey! Pix here to review! I really liked this peice. Had lots of details. Their were a couple mistakes but I think people already covered them. Overall. This is amazing. ...
May 30, 2012 -
Re: The Dance
Pix here! I really like this. It's really like your there. Great job. Also, as Nargles said, punctuation is a problem. At the end of each line, I think their ...
May 30, 2012 -
Re: Paul The Unicorn Saves Bunniville from Rainbow Destruction
Alright..... So this is a VERY short...short story. :) But that's okay. This is so adorable. Adorable.
May 29, 2012 -
Re: Enslaved Chapter 1 Scene 3
Hay! Pix here! I really liked this- although I think at the beginning where you put the scenes beforehand, the scenes are in the same folder so their on the ...
May 29, 2012 -
Re: I'll Wait
Hey! Pix here! I really like this song. Very moving. Amazing. I think you should seperate the [brackets] from the stanza's so it would be less confusing because when I ...
May 29, 2012 -
Re: The Perfect Day
Wow! This is good! I really like it! At first I thought it was real. I'll admit it. :P At the end I was like- "No!" I read the previous ...
May 29, 2012 -
Re: Him <3
Hey! Pix here! I really like this peice. I see a couple grammar mistakes- "Hey sweetie, why don't you come over here a minute?" ^^I corrected that, the H was ...
May 29, 2012 -
Re: Freedom Cry
Pix here! I'm going to review your poem today. :D BOLD is my editing. M ore than bloodied scars, M ore than the wounds and mars. B etter than a ...
May 28, 2012 -
Re: The Ghastly Game of Blame
Hey, Pix here. I'm going to review this poem for ya- The BOLD is what I wote. The land of all hallow, I like this, I think how you continued ...
May 28, 2012 -
Re: What is Love? [Part 2!]
Vamp. Amazing. I was crying when I read this. It's so detailed and you really get a feel for it. It's very...sensitive. Like, You know. :P and I could never ...
May 27, 2012 -
Re: Sapphires and Emeralds: Prologue
Oh. My. Gods. Okay, This was amazing, Rocky. :) I really like how at the beginning you made the whole thing so detailed! Detailed!! I didn't see one thing wrong ...
May 27, 2012 -
Re: .
I really like this. :D Plus...Rayah is my character and that was something she would've said. You know her so well! :) Alright...Here we go... I can tell you don't ...
May 26, 2012 -
Re: ID
Okay. First of all.... YES! I loved this. I really did. I don't have ONE thing to say that is negitive. Amazing. Please write more, your really talented. When I ...
May 15, 2012 -
Re: Dull...
Hey, Pix here! To start off, I really like this. It has lots of detail (Which I amazingly love) And I think you really put alot of effort into this. ...
May 15, 2012 -
Re: To Go Astray
Hey Pix here! Here are some things I think about your poem- -I like how you kept the stanzas at the same pace, it tells you know what your doing. ...
Apr 23, 2012