*Invades for review day*
What up Seraph? I'm invading your portfolio for review day xD
So, for starters, i'm not a HUGE fan of rhyming poetry, but I liked your gentle rhymes in this poem. It didn't interrupt the flow of the poem too much, so good for you MATTHEW.
For some strange reason, and please correct me if i'm wrong, but is this poem about birth and the life cycle? xD well it looks like the first two stanzas are.
In your first stanza you described a boy breaking through a door (the womb xD) and entering the world with so much love, and then being corrupted and going astray. Then you describe him as becoming lost in the world, and the hatred he feels towards it. Then you go on to say how often and useless it is that the world chews these people up and then spits them out.
I'm sorry if I interpreted it wrong, that's just the feels that came to me upon reading this
Overall I liked your poem, wonder if everything in your portfolio will be as fun to review
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