PhoenixXander

This is a unique way to like about Christmas, I enjoy it very much! Good job! I like- well I like how you tried to make this have a rhyme ...

Tag, you're it again! This sad, and so relatable. My favorite line is, "Fight other’s fights But can’t fight your own" because that's totally me. Always fighting others battles, and ...

Hi there, I'm Phoenix and I'm going to be review your poem today. First off I'm going to tell you all the things I like about this poem, so be ...

I like how you have combined two styles of poetry in this. Short poems are really hard to write, because it's harder to get a point across, and have enough ...

I really enjoy this, I'm a really big "hippie" and I practically worship the Earth itself. It is really really sad how bad we treat the earth. /: I like ...

This a really sad little story. :c It's really good though, I very much enjoy it. I did notice when you were talking about putting things into the tree house ...

Well this is unique, I really like the style. I do think that "this throat" sounds weird. Maybe you meant his, or something else? Sounds weird how it is. Also, ...

I like what this is about, poetry about nature is beautiful! I've always myself thought about just this, all about leaves, how they have to lose their battle against the ...

Holy heck, yes, write more! Really cool spin off of something you wouldn't expect someone to write about. (: I think you should probably take out the questions at the ...

I like what this is about, it sounds lovely. I'm a sucker for poems like this, honestly. It doesn't flow well though, the words just don't really click. It's also ...

Ah, what a common subject in poetry these days, well in all days actually. I know this poem probably means a lot to you, because it's about some very personal ...

I like some of the lines in here, but overall this is really messy. The first line is just a statement, a very bland one at that. The second line ...

Well, I like the overall meaning of this poem, in a way. I mean I love the environment, our beautiful Earth, but I wouldn't go as far as Eco-terrorism. I ...

You had me hooked right away. The poem doesn't seem to link well to the story though. It also ends way to quickly! I think you should expand on your ...

I actually really like this poem. It's short, simple (but complex also?), and rhymes. Not many poems need centered really, it's not necessary, but it really works for this poem, ...