PhoenixXander

Hello, I'm Phoenix and I'll be reviewing your piece today! Okay, let me start off with holy crap, this is beautiful. I don't think I've ever enjoyed a work from ...

Hello, I'm Phoenix and I'll be reviewing your poem today. First off, I really enjoyed this poem. I love what it's about and your really have all aspects of your ...

Hello, I'm Phoenix and I'll be reviewing your poetry today! Let me start out with how much I enjoyed reading your poem. The content is very well shown, and the ...

Hello, I'm Phoenix, and I'll be reviewing your poem today! First let me start out with how I like the theme of your poem. The content is very good, and ...

Hello, I'm Phoenix and I'll be reviewing your chapter today! I like this, it's a good start, but it needs a lot of work. There are a lot of errors, ...

Hi, I'm Phoenix and I'll be reviewing your lyrics today! First I'm going to start by saying this is not what I expected- it's better! I totally thought it would ...

Hello, I'm Phoenix and I'll be reviewing your poem today! First, I can feel that you're heart broken from this, but it doesn't have detail too it. You use a ...

Hello, I'm Phoenix and I'll be reviewing your poem today. I'll start with this; I like how the title is straight to the point, but you could definitely improve it ...

I understand what you're trying to get at, but I don't feel like all the pieces are there. I hate to be really critical, but this poem is- well, it's ...

This is really good, even though I don't know binary code and therefor couldn't read some lines. :b The part about the cotton balls grossed me out ever time, and ...

Haha, I really like this. The thought of having a literal worth to your life is kind of scary, just to think about it. I like how Avery reacts also, ...

Pardon my language, but holly h*ll. This is a really good piece. I can relate to it to, I had a girlfriend like this, and I even took her in ...

This reminds me of those poems you read in elementary school, it brought back memories! Reminded me of the time we had to write about why we liked school and ...

This is an amazing, amazing love poem, with lots of potential. Every aspect of the imagery was just magical, detailed, and complex. My favorite part would have to be, "and ...

I really enjoyed this! Great work! This is a common theme in romantic poetry, a relatable love poem about going back to someone you once loved. I see that happen ...