PassionForAPen

Hello! I quite liked this poem, its different. I like the way you kept up the ''Why?'' question throughout, Sometimes its hard to keep your idea going but you Did ...

Hello! :) Upon reading this poem I actually stoped for a minute and was slighty taken aback, Its so short yet its utterly filled with such feeling. I really like ...

Hello! :) First of all I would like to say that I really like this poem, It is quite different and the imagery you use is simply beautiful! I like ...

Heya! I think I'm the only person who doesn't see a rhyming problem here? Oh well, on to the poem. I think its wonderful! Its refreshing to see something that ...

Heya! You do need a little work on presentation but I just want to comment on the poem itself. I think as poems about love go this is wonderful. I ...

Heya! I must say i quite liked this. Its rather interesting and its not a typical ''I love you but you don't love me anymore'' poem. I love how you ...

I quite like this. The way you wrote it very straight forward, no big descriptions, makes it interesting to read. I liked: ''Deep blackness consuming, Eyelids glued down Slip under ...

First of all, Welcome to The Young Writers Society. I thought that this poem was quite good, Its to the point and simple, And you used nice effective language. ''A ...

I quite like this, I don't think that it matters that much that its a common topic, Its personal to you, and that makes it yours, so well done. :) ...

Wow. That was one of the most beautiful descriptions of such strong, yet common emotions i have ever read... [deleted] I adore the way you have written this section of ...

I really liked this alot, ''It was you that I wanted, it was you all along. And now that I’ve had you, it hurts that you’re gone'' These lines are ...

I really liked this, It was short however is effective in its purpose. ''What should I do? I'm confused...I think of us and I muse...'' Thats a fantastic part of ...

I really liked this, ''We miss our time to cry and tear away our yesterday. And our silence drives away the memories of that ex girlfriend and how shes sleeping ...

I really enjoyed this poem, I think its very intense and your thrown into the scene immediately and out of it again, all in a few lines, and even though ...

I definately like this poem, ''When we were young, we fell in love,I, an outcast, and you, the midst of summer's hot, breathy silence,I let you get closer than anyone ...