Heya!
I think I'm the only person who doesn't
see a rhyming problem here?
Oh well, on to the poem.
I think its wonderful!
Its refreshing to see something that isn't written
about love and heartbreak for once.
(I for one write about them far too much)
I read the poem slowly,
taking in each word,
and I found that it rhymes perfectly too me.
I like the introduction,
''It's hard to grasp that space is so vast, And one day or another that space will collapse. Time will then cease, and light will go black; Super massive black holes are on the attack''
And super massive black hole?
Its a decent song,
(the line reminded me of Muse )
Keep up the writing.
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