Passion

Awwww thank you all for your comments I look forward to seeing more and more corrections on my word :D I'm so loving all the feedback!

I am content in how these came out, they were much better than what I thought they'd be. I'm glad for that too.

Hahahaha thank you :D It's okay really, it is a bit sad, but at the same time, not having my dad in my life gave me the ability to write ...

*blush* Awww thank you guys! It's been such a while since I've even added poetry on here, I'm glad that I've broke my posting fast and had so many great ...

Thank you all for you responses, I was actually very nervous about posting this one. I thought it was going to be another mushy-gushy poem. One of the regular poems ...

Dang... I don't know what to say. That's a beautiful poem. It was very...I don't know. It was amazing.

Bravo Scarlett! I like the poem. That could be a life poem for many. Keep it goin chicka!

Oh wow, that poem was too funny. It had a nice flow and played nice on humor. I couldn't stop laughing throughout it. I got my sister to read it ...

Good wording, it was really good wording. And I think there are people that would run with you too, for freedom, but also for love.

Oh wow! That was actually funny at the end. I thought it was about some guy (as did my sister) and yet it was about the internet. Way to show ...

I actually like both of your posts, Jas, I didn't even notice that I used "one" and not "on" thanks for pointing that out. I should definitely proofread things more ...

I don't think your poem is bad at all, I actually like it. Small, simple, but also makes you want to see the hourglass for all its glory no matter ...

Isn't this a very emotional poem. to have and hold. I like it.

But I like you, I really do The question is, do you like me too? It's so simply innocent and cute. The question that plagues the mind of many people ...

Thank you...I'll look into that.