Hey Passion! Nice to see you back.
Yep. Proofreading is your friend. Though I can totally understand if you make lots of mistakes... you should see some of the papers that my professors send back. They are very confused!
I like the image of the river and the waterfall and the prodigy! I also liked the image of him falling off! Now, instead of talking about the gifts that he has (which, yes, you kind of O.D. on, lol,) I would much prefer you to use that image of running water to symbolism his thoughts and his brilliance. I think that would be most excellent.
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