PaperNessa

Lmao. Can I say an acronym on here? Will the writing gods allow that? Either way, I saw your Sam Smith references. "Make it to Me", "Good Thing"... those are ...

Hm. Deep. I liked the last stanza especially. It was hollowing yet heartbreaking at the same time. Great job. My only suggestion would be to change some of the wording ...

Evening! This was an interesting bit of poetry. It highlighted the difficulties in understanding and interpreting meanings of literature. I suppose its all up to the person's respective paradigm to ...

Hello there! I am a big fan of apples so I figured I'd give this poem a read. It was truly thought-provoking. I enjoyed reading it. My only suggestion is ...

Very odd. I understand that this is a prologue, but it doesn't make much sense. The first paragraph was well written. However, towards the end, the events taking place got ...

This poem is so awesome. I loved every line of it! I thought it was really well-written. There wasn't really a rhyme scheme, but it just made the poem more ...

I posted a previous review, but it isn't shown here? Here's the rewritten version: I really liked this poem. It was beautifully written. There was a very interesting use of ...

This was such a cute short story! I loved it so much. The story was a bit cliche, but you wrote it simply and described the scene well. I could ...

I really enjoyed this poem. It wasn't like I expected. It was a bit depressing with the mentioning at the end of a lost love. However, you didn't over exaggerate ...

Cute poem. However, it lacked rhythm and it didn't flow at all. The structure of the poem was strange, and the random captalizing of the words was distracting. It made ...

I really liked this poem. It got more intense as the narrator began to cut/ think of cutting his/herself. The darkness of the poem was relatable and understandable. This was ...

I liked this... It was very good. I had no idea that "IfTonyBlairToldTheTruthForOneDayOurWorldWouldFallApart" would all stand for something. I loved the way it was written. The whole thing gave an ...

This poem was somewhat confusing, or I could tell the writer was confused when writing this. It was simple, short, and conflicting -- I liked it. Good job! There were ...

Best. Poem. Ever. Keep writing. I'm glad you write! I wouldn't change anything in this poem, it is too beautiful. The explaination on why you still write, a look at ...

I thought it was a beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading all of it. It sounded very romantic. Your word choice was alright, you could've added larger, more explanitory words, but ...