PaperNessa

Hello! You reviewed my work "Yet Again" so I will return the favor! This is an interesting narrative poem. Obviously the speaker is conflicted about the way he/she is perceived, ...

Hello! We've both been on here since 2011. How rare. I think that message is very strong here. I would suggest changing some of the punctuation. I noticed that there ...

Let me first start off by saying that I really like this poem. It has a really nice cadence to it with the repetition of the words "safe" and "protect". ...

I'm not entirely sure why this work is categorized as poetry. I would suggest changing the genre to short story. It is written in paragraphs which is untraditional in the ...

I looked on your profile and focused particularly on the age... fourteen is quite young. Many of the writers younger than 15 on here write whiny poems lacking poetic structure. ...

This definitely was interesting. Not many poems are written that effectively convey humor. Overall I liked really liked it but did not get many of the references. The rhythm was ...

The thing that grabbed my attention was the warning for language as most of the writers on here are afraid to use cuss words, and I have been warned a ...

Oh heavens. I was anxious to see why this poem landed itself in the "horror" category, and I definitely understand why. I loved the wicked sweetness you gave the narrator. ...

Well this was a nice little poem about being lost. I really liked the first four lines "You see... cope or strife" because they rhymed and had a certain rhythm ...

Well, the concept of a "killer book" is different, to say the least. I must commend your creative mind for that one. However, I was overwhelmed by the cliched descriptions ...

Wow; this was truly descriptive with just the right amount of suspense. I loved the characterization you included. I regret to admit there are some mistakes, and I have some ...

I agree with Savvy on this one. The poem altogether has a nice concept and definitely possesses potential but the word choice is repetitive and lacking in depth. When I ...

I haven't read much lyrical poetry or songs without knowing the tune, for that matter but I don't know what to think of this piece. It seems quite scattered in ...

For starters, I strongly disagree with Lady Spark about the long-windedness of the poem. I loved the premise of it being a long, unabridged thought (because really, don't humans think ...

This was a little, interesting piece that I was surprised to find here. I really liked the formatting used for this poem, and the placement of different punctuations was great... ...