Young Writers Society

I thought that I should really improve on reviewing poetry so... here I am!
Back again. Also, don't mess with the fandoms. They will destroy you...
(Insert evil laugh here).

So anyway, your poem is obviously meant to be humorous by destroying fandoms (kinda). But I don't really get most of the references. I only get Doctor Who and the Hunger Games. I think there might be a Sherlock reference but I'm not sure. Maybe Supernatural as well.


So anyway.

To know that I'd kick out the dragon

The minute I saw the gleam of a finely sharpened Tooth.

Cipher this, cipher that, on all these detective-y shows.

And we have years until Season 4, which really, really blo--

Half the Internet worships something blue.

And you know what?

.

"Rose Tyler, I..."

Well, you couldn't really burn the TARDIS with a match...
You'd need something much more powerful than that. Or turn off its defence system. Then burn it.
BUT DON'T!

Great poem!

Facebook will be a country
*Dramatic music*
This is good, I like it.
But just don't blink.
Sorry for being weird
lol

Facebook will be a country
*Dramatic music*
This is good, I like it.
But just don't blink.
Sorry for being weird
lol

Facebook will be a country
*Dramatic music*
This is good, I like it.
But just don't blink.
Sorry for being weird
lol

Facebook will be a country
*Dramatic music*
This is good, I like it.
But just don't blink.
Sorry for being weird
lol

I love this poem and hate it at the same time. I am like that little ship (Yes, I typed ship. Obviously I meant sheep, but because this poem is about fandoms I'm just leaving it there) in your avvie that is jumping with excitement.

You would never ever burn the TARDIS, that would probably make the universe explode! I have to admit the beginning made me very very very angry. But reading on I understood what you were doing; you were warning people who are not yet lost!
Lock all your doors,
Keep these fandoms out!
"They'll ruin your lives!"
I scream and shout.
I agree one hundred percent, yet I don't really want to keep them out.

Your rhyming was cool, it even sounded similar to Dr Seuss, if you ask me. And it's great that you mentioned heaps of different fandoms. But that last line, WHY? WHY? WHY?

This definitely was interesting. Not many poems are written that effectively convey humor. Overall I liked really liked it but did not get many of the references. The rhythm was effective in creating that "satirical" tone but I was a bit confused especially in this line:

Cipher this, cipher that, on all these detective-y shows.

And we have years until Season 4, which really, really blo--

.

Oh but wait!

And you know what?

.

"Rose Tyler, I..."