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  • Poetry » Realistic, Other
    Re: inspired by David Bowie

    This poem put me in tears when I originally read it, which was before David Bowie died. Now that he has passed, it puts me in tears for more than ...

    Jan 13, 2016

  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature
    Re: New York City Bagel.

    Happy Monkeys vs Dragons Review Day! I'm Pamplemousse from the Monkeys, and I'm here to review your poem. The first thing that caught my attention was the name of your ...

    Dec 30, 2015

  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: She wants more

    Welcome to YWS! I'm Pamplemousse, and I'm here to review your work. I'm warning you though, I haven't done a review in over a year, so I'm pretty rusty. ...Like ...

    Oct 10, 2015

  • Poetry » Humor, Humor
    Re: Tittie Traitor

    Okay, this just made my day. Not even going to try to review this, because I'll just start laughing. Okay, I will try. I think this poem would be even ...

    Jun 15, 2014

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: Who are you?

    Hello! Lati here to do a review for you. But, before I begin... Your picture.

    Mar 30, 2014

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Weeping Willow

    Hello, Lillie here to do a review to hopefully end strong for EUS! Well, I really liked this poem , although I ended up singing it. I loved how you ...

    Dec 29, 2013

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: Horrible

    Heyo, Lati here to do a review for The Apple Dumpling Gang! (On my tablet!) I really liked this poem, even though it was so short! (Of course, it had ...

    Nov 24, 2013

  • Poetry » General, Lyrical
    Re: Imagination

    Heyo, Lati here to do a review for you! Let me start off by saying one thing... OOH, THIS IS PRETTY! :D I really liked this poem. I can't really ...

    Nov 23, 2013

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: A place for you.

    Hey! Lillie here to do a review for you! Before I start, I would like to say, even though it's a little late, Welcome to YWS! :D Okay, now to ...

    Sep 15, 2013

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: Farewell, my Knight

    Hey! Lillie here to review your work! First off, I would like to say that this almost brought me to tears. This such a sad poem! Well, here are the ...

    Aug 25, 2013

  • Poetry » Health, General
    Re: Sleep Won't Come

    Hey! Lillie here to review your work! (On a tablet, so this is going to take a while to type! First off, I would like to say this is a ...

    Aug 25, 2013

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: I want to be punished no more, Daddy.

    Hey! Lillie here to review your work! Well, I should get started! First off, I would like to say that your work almost brought me to tears. This can be ...

    Aug 23, 2013

  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative
    Re: The Worm Goblin

    Hey! This is funny, because in a book I recently finished reading, there was a worm demon thingy in it! (Infernal Devices series, Book #3, Clockwork Princess, Written by Cassandra ...

    Jun 30, 2013

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: So Much Emotion

    Wow. In a way, I can relate to several of these adjectives. I love how you described emotions using such vivid and descriptive words. So, I'm seeing that this must ...

    Jun 30, 2013

  • Poetry » Literature, Review
    Re: A Stone Man

    Hi! I loved this poem, and I must ask, Do you write poetry often? Oh well, let's get started. 1) This isn't an error, but what does suppression mean? I'm ...

    Jun 30, 2013


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