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OreosAreLife

Ashley

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: *I don't have a title yet*

    Heyo Gymnast2801! I'm Oreos and I'm here to review your Chapter. Starting off I loved the first lines: The hands ticked from four to five. The noise of the ticking ...

    Dec 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: The Bridge With a View

    Hey Casanova! It's OreosAreLife here for a review! So first off I like your title, it was very intriguing. It made me want to read this and lets just say ...

    Nov 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: In the Dust

    Hey Rememberance this is OreosAreLife here for a quick review! So I really enjoyed reading this poem! I liked they way you described things thought out it. The flow was ...

    Nov 4, 2016
  • Other » Other, Action / Adventure Re: Tiko

    Hey OrangeBanana it's AshleyDashley here for a review! I like this story but there are a lot of spelling mistakes and grammar errors. You should proofread your work before you ...

    Oct 27, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Spiritual Re: Golden Leaves and Icy Air

    Hey deeproses it's AshleyDashley here for a review! First off I liked your title it was interesting and made me want to read your poem. And as I read it ...

    Oct 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Among Dying Stars (Part 4)

    Hey Wizard! It's AshleyDashleyhere for a review! I think once you proofread this it should be okay so no complaints from me! Anyway, I really liked this chapter and the ...

    Oct 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Among Dying Stars (Part 3)

    Hey Wizard it's AshleyDashley here for a review! Okay I read parts one and two and just loved them. I like your tite it peaked my interest and made me ...

    Oct 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: when the first snowflakes start to fall

    Hey Casanova, it's AshleyDashley here for a review. First off I'm sick do this may not be the best review. Anyway, I liked your title, but maybe try capitalizing the ...

    Sep 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: My emotional puzzle.

    Hey RadiantShadow, it's AshleyDashley here for a review! First off, I really like your title, but the letters should be capitalized to be: My Emotional Puzzle. It would make it ...

    Sep 29, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: I don't understand

    Hey Spartan118, it's AshleyDashley here for a review! First off your tile caught my attention and it made me curious to what you did not understand. After I read it ...

    Sep 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Dear Jess. From, That Girl You Probably Don't Remember.

    Hey mavisknightley, it's AshleyDashley here for a review! First off I really like your title! It really got me curious to what you had written and made me want to ...

    Sep 29, 2016
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Dear Mary

    Hey Casanova, it's AshleyDashley here for a review! So first off I liked your title. It lets the reader know this is personal. The way you start off is almost ...

    Sep 28, 2016
  • Article / Essay » Romantic, General Re: The Moon in Everyone's Sky

    Hey BelleMirus, it's AshleyDashley here for a review! First off, your title really caught my attention and made me curious as to what this was about. And then I read ...

    Sep 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Emoji

    Hey friend! It is AshleyDashley here for a review! First off, love the title! It made me curious as to what you would say about emojis and them when I ...

    Sep 27, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wings

    Hey writervid it's AshleyDashley here for a review! First off I really enjoyed your poem. And your title really caught my eye and got me curious to see what you ...

    Sep 26, 2016


I wondered why we put villains in our stories when we have plenty of them in real life; then I realized that maybe we wanted stories where the good guy wins.
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