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Re: *I don't have a title yet*
Heyo Gymnast2801! I'm Oreos and I'm here to review your Chapter. Starting off I loved the first lines: The hands ticked from four to five. The noise of the ticking ...
Dec 6, 2016 -
Re: The Bridge With a View
Hey Casanova! It's OreosAreLife here for a review! So first off I like your title, it was very intriguing. It made me want to read this and lets just say ...
Nov 19, 2016 -
Re: In the Dust
Hey Rememberance this is OreosAreLife here for a quick review! So I really enjoyed reading this poem! I liked they way you described things thought out it. The flow was ...
Nov 4, 2016 -
Re: Tiko
Hey OrangeBanana it's AshleyDashley here for a review! I like this story but there are a lot of spelling mistakes and grammar errors. You should proofread your work before you ...
Oct 27, 2016 -
Re: Golden Leaves and Icy Air
Hey deeproses it's AshleyDashley here for a review! First off I liked your title it was interesting and made me want to read your poem. And as I read it ...
Oct 4, 2016 -
Re: Among Dying Stars (Part 4)
Hey Wizard! It's AshleyDashleyhere for a review! I think once you proofread this it should be okay so no complaints from me! Anyway, I really liked this chapter and the ...
Oct 4, 2016 -
Re: Among Dying Stars (Part 3)
Hey Wizard it's AshleyDashley here for a review! Okay I read parts one and two and just loved them. I like your tite it peaked my interest and made me ...
Oct 4, 2016 -
Re: when the first snowflakes start to fall
Hey Casanova, it's AshleyDashley here for a review. First off I'm sick do this may not be the best review. Anyway, I liked your title, but maybe try capitalizing the ...
Sep 30, 2016 -
Re: My emotional puzzle.
Hey RadiantShadow, it's AshleyDashley here for a review! First off, I really like your title, but the letters should be capitalized to be: My Emotional Puzzle. It would make it ...
Sep 29, 2016 -
Re: I don't understand
Hey Spartan118, it's AshleyDashley here for a review! First off your tile caught my attention and it made me curious to what you did not understand. After I read it ...
Sep 29, 2016 -
Re: Dear Jess. From, That Girl You Probably Don't Remember.
Hey mavisknightley, it's AshleyDashley here for a review! First off I really like your title! It really got me curious to what you had written and made me want to ...
Sep 29, 2016 -
Re: Dear Mary
Hey Casanova, it's AshleyDashley here for a review! So first off I liked your title. It lets the reader know this is personal. The way you start off is almost ...
Sep 28, 2016 -
Re: The Moon in Everyone's Sky
Hey BelleMirus, it's AshleyDashley here for a review! First off, your title really caught my attention and made me curious as to what this was about. And then I read ...
Sep 28, 2016 -
Re: Emoji
Hey friend! It is AshleyDashley here for a review! First off, love the title! It made me curious as to what you would say about emojis and them when I ...
Sep 27, 2016 -
Re: Wings
Hey writervid it's AshleyDashley here for a review! First off I really enjoyed your poem. And your title really caught my eye and got me curious to see what you ...
Sep 26, 2016
