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  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Wonder

    I think this is a good however I would suggest that if you are going to use periods use commas as well, it would make the flow of your work ...

    Feb 20, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Save Myself

    Hey CateRose17 it's OreosAreLife here for a review! So it's been awhile since I reviewed anything so I'm a little rusty. Here we go! I loved your title it really ...

    Apr 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: family portrait

    Hey Apricity, it's OreosAreLife here for a review! First off your title drew me in and it really made me curious to what you have to say. And all I ...

    Apr 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Mother

    Hey honeymoon, OreosAreLife here for a review. Now I absolutely love this poem, you really bring a lot of emotion into it and I like that. Also the image you ...

    Apr 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: The Tale of Ol' Victoria

    Hey DoormanDan! It's OreosAreLife here for a short review. So let me just start by saying. THIS WAS AMAZING! Your detail throughout the poem was extraordinary. I also really liked ...

    Jan 10, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Wreck

    Hey Artemis28 it's Oreos here for a review! So your title really caught my attention and after I read your poem I thought, Wow, this was great. You really describe ...

    Dec 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: opposite

    Hey DeepRoses, it's Oreos here for a review! First off I really like your title. Then as I read your poem I found it suited it. I just the way ...

    Dec 17, 2016
  • Other » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Series of Color: Black

    Hey DeepRoses it's Oreos here for a review!. I like the theme you have chosen to write about. I find it intriguing and am glad to be able to read ...

    Dec 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Wish (Wicked pt. 2)

    Hey Dime66 it's Oreos here for a review! I really like this one too! It was great. The only thing I would remember is to capitalize your I's. Otherwise your ...

    Dec 14, 2016
  • Other » Other, Realistic Re: The Artist

    Hey XxPheonixKittenxX it's Oreos are for a review! I'm honestly speechelss right now @XxPheonixKittenxX. This was an incredible piece. I was not expecting the ending. I love how you used ...

    Dec 13, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Prologue.2

    Hey AnnMath, it's Oreos here for a review! First off I like that you have two Prologues. It's unique and I like unique. The way you describe the people as ...

    Dec 13, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Prologue.1

    Hey AnnMath it's Oreos here for a review! First off do you have a title for this yet? I would really like to know because I am interested to see ...

    Dec 12, 2016
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Darker Reindeer

    Hey NightKaizer, it's Oreos here for a review! First off, I think your title is intriguing. It made me want to read this. I like how you start off your ...

    Dec 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Literature, Teen Fiction Re: The Ending of Us

    Heyo Mislady101 it's Oreos here for a review! First off I really liked your title. It really made me want to read what you have to say and your description ...

    Dec 8, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The last date.

    Heyo Demi it's Oreos here for a review! First off I really like your title. It is really eye catching and made me wonder what you wrote. It was really ...

    Dec 8, 2016


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