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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Frost and the Sparrow (Chapter one)

    Hello! This is a random weirdo here to review. Sorry it took me so long to read this. I didn't realize know chapter one had come out until recently. The ...

    Jun 25, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Heir of Asratoil - Chapter 1

    Hi! This is a random weirdo here with a review. First off, I'd like to say the prologue is quite interesting, and Chapter 1 sets us on a great start. ...

    Jun 24, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: variations on a theme of sadness

    Hello! This is a random weirdo here to give you a short review. I love this poem. I love it. Literally one of my favorites now. The structure grabs me, ...

    Jun 24, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Dark truth E.2

    Hello! This is a random weirdo here to give you a short review. This is very interesting (and scary!) story, and I can't wait to see where it goes! I ...

    Jun 21, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Lack of Words

    Hello! This is a random weirdo here to give you a short review. (Sorry that it's not longer) This is very interesting! I wonder who you're talking about? It makes ...

    Jun 20, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Purple Stones - Chapter Three

    Hi! This is a random weirdo here to leave a review. I just read this series up to this point, and I must say I'm impressed! I'm intrigued as to ...

    Jun 20, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Window of Opportunity

    Hello! This is a random weirdo here to review. It's so sweet that you made a poem for your dad for father's day! (I still gotta do that...) Overall, this ...

    Jun 18, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Spiritual Re: The Awakening of Mecca

    Hi! This is a random weirdo here to leave you a review. First impression: This is dazzling! I love learning about other religions, and this was beautifully done. Your descriptions ...

    Jun 17, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: i_cantgotosleep

    Hello! This is a random weirdo here to bring you a short review. Sorry if this is too short. I'm incredibly tired today (though not in the same way as ...

    Jun 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Experiences: Four

    Hi! This is a random weirdo here to review. I just read your series up to this one, and I gotta say I'm intrigued! And after writing this review, I'll ...

    Jun 15, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Experiences: Two

    Hi! This is a random weirdo here to give you a short review. This is a very short but interesting poem. Now, I don't know much about sports, but I'm ...

    Jun 14, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: to touch a star

    Hello! This is a random weirdo here to give you a short review. (Sorry in advance; this probably won't be very long.) Wow, this is surprisingly sad. (Are you okay?) ...

    Jun 13, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: First Rain Of June

    Hi! This is a random weirdo here to give you a short review. The first thing I 'ought to say is this is wonderfully written! Again you've created an amazing ...

    Jun 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I don't remember!!!

    There's already a million reviews here but I gotta review this too! It's just too lovely to not comment on. I love this situation; it's so imaginative and you portrayed ...

    Jun 11, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The air is yellow

    Hello! This is a random weirdo here to give you a short review. I've actually experienced this too, though I doubt is was as bad as you described. Our air ...

    Jun 11, 2023


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