"So now appreciate the cold wind against your skin
It is all that will ever touch you without feeling like a sin" I love the wording here, it
literally sounds like a song lyric.
"The blood is all over the tapestry of embroiled memories" This illustrates guilt and
regret perfectly.
Overall amazing language. I did get a little lost at the end...was the writer
punishing himself with "only" having the fork and knife? Was it supposed to
illustrate humility?
GREAT JOB!
Points: 68
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