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Re: A Fresh Start
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Re: It's Complicated Chapter 1: Best Friend or Boyfriend
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Re: Romancing The Devil: Chapter Six
Oh no! It's the last one chapter that I can see is available for my eyes! This is a sad moment. :( You seriously need to write more, ok? That's ...
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Re: Romancing The Devil: Chapter Five
I'm here! High on coffee. I like that you use Italics to describe the past events - like i said, I think that you use the same to describe the ...
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Re: Romancing The Devil: Chapter Four
I like the way you haven't given Boe the perfect homelife. It makes the reader relate to her better and makes her more believable. It also gives us a bigger ...
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Re: Romancing The Devil: Chapter Three
Yes, it's me. I can already see that this chapter is a little longer which makes me excited! Where you write, "losing is not an opinion" - This really made ...
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Re: Romancing The Devil: Chapter Two
Me again :) Ready and lapping up chapter 2! :) There's a few spelling mistakes here and there at the beginning but you will be able to spot them if ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Romancing The Devil: Chapter One
GOOD MORNING! Here to review your chapters for review day so you'll be seeing a lot of me! Here goes! This really made me laugh. I'm a big fan of ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: The Come Back ~Prologue and Chapter 1~
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Re: Prologue- no title yet
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Re: Elemental Prologue
Hi there :) Here to review your work for Review Day. I'm also writing a novel based on Elemental's so I'm always interested in reading another persons take on the ...
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Re: Myrchase: Prologue
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Re: Heartbeats: Chapter one
Hello :) Here to review your work for review day! I will review as I read or I will get confused. Here goes! Where you write, "who had been in ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Cain Salt
Hello :) here to review your work on this happy review day! I will review as I read otherwise I shall get confused/confuzzled. Wow - shadow guards AND vampires - ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: My Apocalypse - Prologue
Hello :) Here to review your prologue for review day! I will review as I read otherwise I will get my knickers in a twist and it won't make any ...
Jul 28, 2013