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Re: For Want of Bondage
After reading "The Basics of Living" I couldn't help looking to see what other fun things you had in store and for some odd reason this one popped out at ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: The Basics of Living
So I'm scolling through the list of stories in the green room and I see "The Basicz of Living". I read the short discription and click on the link. Then ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Bad Girl
Before I say anything, I'd like you to know that I have never listened to this song before, so everything you wrote was like a fresh new story to me. ...
May 10, 2015 -
Re: The awkward one
This is actually very good. It lets the reader think up its own story/meaning of it. To me, this a person who was reunited with old friends that he no ...
Aug 16, 2014 -
Re: Sister
Wow, what a ride! This was an exciting read, indeed. I apologize for rambling a bit, but my mind is still wrapping up around your poem. In my opinion it ...
Aug 10, 2014 -
Re: Drowning in your love
This is very beautiful. I can feel all the angles of love you put into it and that to me makes this a very honest piece. I'm not sure if ...
Aug 10, 2014 -
Re: F-bombing
This was short, but it had a lot of meaning to it. It holds a lot of truth as well. I liked it and I would like to point out ...
Dec 18, 2013 -
Re: I don't know how to write a poem :/
The poem was nice. It showed how people struggle to write something decent. I mean, to some people it comes easily, but for the rest of us we struggle and ...
Dec 10, 2013 -
Re: Dead Seed
I have never done drugs, but imagine it would be like this. Like I have no choice or it doesn't matter because I need to do it. This was good, ...
Dec 6, 2013 -
Re: DragonSlayer - Short story
That was a very sad ending. For some reason I wasn't expecting that at all which is what made it even better. I love dragons and this story is simply ...
Dec 6, 2013 -
Re: Achieving Harmony
I honestly don't know what to say about this, it left me speechless. The main reason is because I can relate to this so well. In person, I am completely ...
Dec 5, 2013 -
Re: Dodging Bullets
This was really good. A lot of people will agree that most songs can pass for a poem and this is diffidently one of them, but the fact that it ...
Dec 5, 2013 -
Re: Are you Real?
This was good. A bit confusing, but good. It is dark and beautiful poem like story. I'm not sure what you meant from it, but what I got was that ...
Dec 4, 2013 -
Re: Stolen Voice
This is really sad. I liked this story because it's very realistic, nothing too exaggerated. I was was quiet when I was younger, but nothing to the point where I ...
Dec 3, 2013 -
Re: Winnie, my sweet
First off, I'm sorry for your loss; this was a beautiful way to lay her at rest. The poem flows wonderfully and each word adds more power to it. The ...
Dec 3, 2013
