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  • Poetry » General, General Re: For Want of Bondage

    After reading "The Basics of Living" I couldn't help looking to see what other fun things you had in store and for some odd reason this one popped out at ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: The Basics of Living

    So I'm scolling through the list of stories in the green room and I see "The Basicz of Living". I read the short discription and click on the link. Then ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Bad Girl

    Before I say anything, I'd like you to know that I have never listened to this song before, so everything you wrote was like a fresh new story to me. ...

    May 10, 2015
  • Other » Other, Humor Re: The awkward one

    This is actually very good. It lets the reader think up its own story/meaning of it. To me, this a person who was reunited with old friends that he no ...

    Aug 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Sister

    Wow, what a ride! This was an exciting read, indeed. I apologize for rambling a bit, but my mind is still wrapping up around your poem. In my opinion it ...

    Aug 10, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: Drowning in your love

    This is very beautiful. I can feel all the angles of love you put into it and that to me makes this a very honest piece. I'm not sure if ...

    Aug 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: F-bombing

    This was short, but it had a lot of meaning to it. It holds a lot of truth as well. I liked it and I would like to point out ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I don't know how to write a poem :/

    The poem was nice. It showed how people struggle to write something decent. I mean, to some people it comes easily, but for the rest of us we struggle and ...

    Dec 10, 2013
  • Lyrics » Health, General Re: Dead Seed

    I have never done drugs, but imagine it would be like this. Like I have no choice or it doesn't matter because I need to do it. This was good, ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: DragonSlayer - Short story

    That was a very sad ending. For some reason I wasn't expecting that at all which is what made it even better. I love dragons and this story is simply ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: Achieving Harmony

    I honestly don't know what to say about this, it left me speechless. The main reason is because I can relate to this so well. In person, I am completely ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Lyrics » Other, General Re: Dodging Bullets

    This was really good. A lot of people will agree that most songs can pass for a poem and this is diffidently one of them, but the fact that it ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Literature Re: Are you Real?

    This was good. A bit confusing, but good. It is dark and beautiful poem like story. I'm not sure what you meant from it, but what I got was that ...

    Dec 4, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Stolen Voice

    This is really sad. I liked this story because it's very realistic, nothing too exaggerated. I was was quiet when I was younger, but nothing to the point where I ...

    Dec 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Winnie, my sweet

    First off, I'm sorry for your loss; this was a beautiful way to lay her at rest. The poem flows wonderfully and each word adds more power to it. The ...

    Dec 3, 2013


My tongue must tell the anger of my heart, or else my heart, concealing it, will break...
— Katherine, The Taming of the Shrew