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  • Poetry » General, General Re: For Want of Bondage

    After reading "The Basics of Living" I couldn't help looking to see what other fun things you had in store and for some odd reason this one popped out at ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: The Basics of Living

    So I'm scolling through the list of stories in the green room and I see "The Basicz of Living". I read the short discription and click on the link. Then ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Bad Girl

    Before I say anything, I'd like you to know that I have never listened to this song before, so everything you wrote was like a fresh new story to me. ...

    May 10, 2015
  • Other » Other, Humor Re: The awkward one

    This is actually very good. It lets the reader think up its own story/meaning of it. To me, this a person who was reunited with old friends that he no ...

    Aug 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Sister

    Wow, what a ride! This was an exciting read, indeed. I apologize for rambling a bit, but my mind is still wrapping up around your poem. In my opinion it ...

    Aug 10, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: Drowning in your love

    This is very beautiful. I can feel all the angles of love you put into it and that to me makes this a very honest piece. I'm not sure if ...

    Aug 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: F-bombing

    This was short, but it had a lot of meaning to it. It holds a lot of truth as well. I liked it and I would like to point out ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I don't know how to write a poem :/

    The poem was nice. It showed how people struggle to write something decent. I mean, to some people it comes easily, but for the rest of us we struggle and ...

    Dec 10, 2013
  • Lyrics » Health, General Re: Dead Seed

    I have never done drugs, but imagine it would be like this. Like I have no choice or it doesn't matter because I need to do it. This was good, ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: DragonSlayer - Short story

    That was a very sad ending. For some reason I wasn't expecting that at all which is what made it even better. I love dragons and this story is simply ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: Achieving Harmony

    I honestly don't know what to say about this, it left me speechless. The main reason is because I can relate to this so well. In person, I am completely ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Lyrics » Other, General Re: Dodging Bullets

    This was really good. A lot of people will agree that most songs can pass for a poem and this is diffidently one of them, but the fact that it ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Literature Re: Are you Real?

    This was good. A bit confusing, but good. It is dark and beautiful poem like story. I'm not sure what you meant from it, but what I got was that ...

    Dec 4, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Stolen Voice

    This is really sad. I liked this story because it's very realistic, nothing too exaggerated. I was was quiet when I was younger, but nothing to the point where I ...

    Dec 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Winnie, my sweet

    First off, I'm sorry for your loss; this was a beautiful way to lay her at rest. The poem flows wonderfully and each word adds more power to it. The ...

    Dec 3, 2013


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