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Re: The Sad Little Flower
Hello there, here to review. First of all I'd like to say, that was a very good poem! I really liked it and it made me sad and happy at ...
Jan 7, 2016 -
Re: Forget Your Earth -- Prologue
Hello, I am here to review. Okay, so this is a good prologue which already starts introducing us to the characters, and already we start noticing some traits in your ...
Jan 2, 2016 -
Re: This pen...
Hello, I am here to review. I must say, this took me by surprise. I was not at all expecting what I read from the title, but it was very ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Beat
Hello, here for another review. This poem was also pretty good. The verses are really short and usually contain a similar number of syllables, so that gives a really good ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Lovers in an argument
Hello there, here for a review. Oh man, the end was never expected as I read through the beginning. And yet, it was inevitable, and I should have seen it ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: They Say Social Media is...
Hello, here to review your poem. So, this is very interesting. I find that in some parts you really reflect the way things are in society, and you write it ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Ball Of Ice
Hello, I am here to review your essay. I'd like to say, this is pretty informative and well-written enough. However, I wish you could have written some more of this! ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: December is always the worst
Hello, I am here to review. This was quite an impacting poem. I think that usually misusing cuss words can be quite delicate, as some readers might be scared off ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Salvaged Camera
Hello there, I am here to review. This was a very nice poem, and I like how you made the narrator of the poem compare to a camera, and I ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Nyctinastic (Night-Pressed) Mind
Wow. I do not know how to review this. Honestly, it is amazing, and the only thing that I ask myself is how did I find a poem as great ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: To Slaughter, Incinerate, Run Over with a Quacking Tractor, Murder, Shred, Feed to Rabid Bunnies, Blow up, and Exile a Mocking Bird
Hello, here to review this extremely good-natured review poem that you wrote. The first stanza is very good. It catches my attention, it flows nicely, it hooks the reader with ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Tiger, Tiger Burning Bright
Hello, I am here to review. First of all, this was a really good poem. Very nice poetic language, very nice form, very nice flow. Congratulations. I really like this ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: A Question Raised, an Answer Discovered
Hello, I am here to review. This was a very good essay, and it was very motivational to put someone on a path towards a better lifestyle. It is true, ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Writer's Block
Hello, here for a short review. This was a good poem, and in general I like poems that speak about writer's block, because it means that you have beaten it, ...
Dec 28, 2015 -
Re: Fallen Angel
Hello, I'm here to review. That was a very good poem. The metaphor you used about us flying (or not flying because of our sins) are very good, and I ...
Dec 28, 2015
