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Re: Melodious Murderer.
Hello Observer her to give a review( or whatever what I'm doing is): I'll keep it short. Your work is very dark and it's a darkness which is well constructed. ...
Apr 14, 2015 -
Re: Bliss
Hello, I just have to say that this is one of the most creative forms of writing I've seen. You can make a point that I haven't really read that ...
Apr 14, 2015 -
Re: The Angel Belief
Observer here to review, Well I find your work to be interesting in more than one aspect. I wonder, is the shape which lines in this single stanza form intentional. ...
Apr 14, 2015 -
Re: There Will Be A Time.
Observerxd here for a review(or whatever, I'm not sure my opinion can be called a review): Though this particular subject is not something I would usually look into, I've read ...
Apr 14, 2015 -
Re: The Struggle
First of all I must say I'm happy you decided to write something longer than two-liners (I'm not saying that two-liners are bad - just not my cup of tea). ...
Dec 1, 2014 -
Re: Do right and wrong really exist?
Yo nice little chain of thoughts you got here. I won't say you're wrong, although I find it strange for someone to post an idea like this online and then ...
Nov 5, 2014 -
Re: Help Wanted
Hello there friend, Observerxd here for a quick review of your work. Keep in mind I am by no means "a critic" and all my reviews are based solely on ...
Nov 5, 2014 -
Re: Bare Bones
It is a horror poem. It has the elemts of such poem. Creates a dark ambient and a tricky ending. My first impression to the reference of the name "yorick" ...
Jul 2, 2014 -
Re: Dressed In Wine
Hey Observerxd here I will atempt to give you a good review. Keep in mind that I'm new to this and my reviews can(and probably are) be wrong, so just ...
Jul 2, 2014 -
Re: Lament
Observerxd here to give you a review. Before the review itself, I'd like to say that I'm stil a bit new to this whole reviewing thing. I just express my ...
Jul 2, 2014 -
Re: If I let you Love me...
Well now this is interesting in more ways than one. The fact that you are this young (14) and you have expressed love in such a way is simply incredible. ...
Mar 20, 2014 -
Re: Expectations
Hey ObserverxD here ! Before i get started I want it to be clear that I don't believe everything I say is a fact. I'm just expresing my opinion on ...
Mar 16, 2014 -
Re: numb.
Hey ObserverxD here ! Before i get started I want it to be clear that I don't believe everything I say is a fact. I'm just expresing my opinion on ...
Mar 16, 2014 -
Re: Nutrient
Hey ObserverxD here ! Before i get started I want it to be clear that I don't believe everything I say is a fact. I'm just expresing my opinion on ...
Mar 16, 2014 -
Re: Now doth Time waste me.
Hey ObserverxD here ! Before i get started I want it to be clear that I don't believe everything I say is a fact. I'm just expresing my opinion on ...
Mar 16, 2014
