Oakenshield

I can relate a lot to this poem. My favorite line is ''to be called a writer'' it is very strong and it looks like I see my reflection in ...

hey there Dazzle for a review here! I want to say that your poem is so beautiful, it let me think of my own poem ;) this was really good ...

Stress is something difficult to understand, it comes when we are tired, tired o life, tired of moving on, tired of everything. But you can beat stress: do things you ...

Omg I know now why I like poetry, it was beautiful! Really good and cool, I love the last line, that makes your poem complete... Now this poem makes my ...

That was awesome but I noticed that you use 'but' a lot, you use that word two times in one sentence. It don't bothers me only you can change it ...

oh wow I wish I was free, this poem was very peaceful and strong. Filled with a lot of cheer also and my favorite line is I am free, I ...

Now I'm curious what the prize is? Cause that you haven't posted in this poem. Or is it up to us to make something from the prize? That is nice, ...

This was really cool and I like this one, ''be out of my reach'' is a really amazing line and ''there's too much to see'' is what I like the ...

Oooh this was cool and damn you have talent, it rhymes and it has a nice flow too, this was very strong and you are one of my favorite authors ...

Love the good rhythm and flow of this one. Poems that are rhyming are my favorite ones. This was so strong and I read this like a song in my ...

This was sad but also beautiful, in a sad way then, it gives me tears in my eyes and it fills my heart with sorrow, but my favorite line is ...

Ice and snow what a strong combination, I love it, to bad that it was so short, ''Melted like ice'' is my favorite line from this one. And ''The tears ...

I love the image of the bird and how you said that we are never can be free, we are always captured in our bodies and I like the silence ...

Really cool, I think this goes about missing someone that means a lot to us, you have that really good written in this poem, I like the last line cause ...

I love the rhythm of this one and it rhymes, I like how you use the line from ''a new view of storm shattering skies'' again and again after every ...