Little Destiny

Omg I know now why I like poetry, it was beautiful! Really good and cool, I love the last line, that makes your poem complete...

Now this poem makes my head empty and that is very cool, music on and reading poetry is the best combination ever!

You have talent, don't throw that away, cause this poem was really a pleasant read

Dazzle

This is a really winsome poem. I can tell that Destiny is a lovely little kitten, and you have some delightful imagery in the form of lines like "cow spotted kitten" and "crooked whiskers". The problems in this poem are really minimal, but I'll give them a quick run-over anyways.
The first, fourth, and final lines are significantly longer than the rest of the poem, which breaks up the rhythm that's other poise consistent throughout the poem. I'd suggest breaking them up into two, shorter lines.
The second difficulty (which is really the only other problem I can spot) is that in the seventh line, you've got an unnecessary comma.
As I said previously, this is a lovely poem about a darling cat. I wish you and your pet the best of luck!

This poem brings tears to my eyes. It seems that Destiny's image is still in your mind. I hope that you will not forget the cat. To me the poem expresses the feelings that you and Destiny share. It is not a superficial tag to express Destiny. It is something more than that. Great poem. Nice thing to read while drinking tea.