NoirLumiere

Hey there! I'm Noir, and I'll be your reviewer this evening. Let's rock. First, concept. The concept behind this was amazing. I loved it, and it held my attention the ...

Hey, Seastormy! Noir here, and I'll be your reviewer today! Let's rock. First off, concept. The concept for this reminds me of the old song "Whiskey River, Take My mind." ...

Wow. Noir here, and I'll be your reviewer today. First, I love the concept. It was excellent and gripped me the whole way through. Next, the rhythm. It was catchy ...

Hello, Shelby. Welcome to YWS, first off. I'm Noir, and I'll be your reviewer today. First, I must applaud you for creating a great balance of happiness and sadness. You ...

Hi. This was very well written, and it had excellent flow. However, there was a couple of times where I noticed small grammar errors. There should be a comma after ...

Okay, this one was creepy. It really symbolized the temptation to go to the darkness. Many people have gone into that darkness and never returned. But, some that have gone ...

Cool. This one was an awesome topic. I liked the part about"Kiss another girl who's prettier than me," oddly enough. This was also kind of awkward to read, as I ...

Aww. This one was a sad one to read, and yet, it was totally open. You didn't hold back, and that means something. However, I did notice something. The spiky ...

Wow. Well, this was, uh, what word am I looking here for. Interesting, to say the least. It was very creepy, and at the end, sad. There were a couple ...

O.O Okay, first off, I'm not going to sleep for a week after reading this poem. It was cool to read, and it was scary, but it didn't chase me ...

Whoa. Okay, this one was interesting to say the least. It was creepy, which I expect from a horror poem. It also had great flow, which made it roll of ...

Wow. Okay, this one was thoroughly creepy. I'm probably gonna have nightmares tonight. THis had great descriptions, very impressive rhyming, and a general creepiness. I especially like the part where ...

This was an awesome poem. I loved it. It seems like you have built up the courage to ask, something I could never do. You also kept the rhyme going, ...

Wow. This is an interesting choice. I really like how you started. "You'll never read this" was an awesome hook. That's how my "Work" went. You know they'll never read ...

Okay. first off angie, this was amazing. I loved the amount of vivid detail you put into it. Second of all, I also enjoyed the way you described your emotion ...