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Re: Prologue-The Necromancers Moon
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Oh my goodness. This is just great! I really enjoyed reading this. You've certainly grabbed my attention and gotten me to ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: The Nightmare Begins-Chapter 3
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I haven't read the other chapters yet, but I figured I'd review this anyway. So please excuse any of my ignorance. ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Dreamers/Fighters
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! There really isn't much I can say about this story. I think it's brilliant. I really love the way that the ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Letting You In. (Jcsmooth)
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! First off, let me say that I really enjoy this poem. I'm not really into poetry (I like stories and novels ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: The Cycle of Seasons
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! There are some grammar mistakes in here that I'd like to point out. I can hear the sounds of the creek ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Telling the Truth
Hi there! First of, I'd like to say that I agree with Crystal about your title. I don't see how the title relates based on what I've read. But there's ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Lesser Being Chapter 1
Hi there! So I read your prologue, but there wasn't enough that I could say to make a proper review. I may end up adding a few comments about the ...
Oct 10, 2013 -
Re: Chapter 1: Encounter
Hi there! There's one thing in this that really stands out to me. You don't have any quotation marks around the dialogue. You put little dashes before each new person ...
Oct 9, 2013 -
Re: Secret Walls: Prologue
Hi there! You've definitely gotten me interested in this story. And that's my big thing with prologues. They should have action (or some kind of something happening), at least one ...
Oct 8, 2013 -
Re: Why Me?
Hi there! This is a really cute story. I really like it :) I think it's adorable how this boy has come back as a ghost to become Raven's guardian ...
Oct 7, 2013 -
Re: Devil Touch - Chapter Three
Hi there! I feel so horrible about this...I completely forgot about reviewing your novel (-_-;) But I'm back to review another chapter. Please don't be mad! Just kidding, I know ...
Sep 11, 2013 -
Re: Think Like a Dude Entry #3 - Pickup Lines
Hi there! So I just finished reviewing the second chapter of this and I'm not sure which review you'll read first--that one or this one--so I'll repeat a small part ...
Sep 11, 2013 -
Re: Think Like A Dude Entry #2
Hi there! I can see you took my advice and started telling what's going on in Evie's life. Either that or it's just a coincidence XD They say the first ...
Sep 11, 2013 -
Re: Think Like A Dude
Hi there! So I have to sat that the title intrigued me. It's very original and sounds like a good story is to be told here. Overall I don't see ...
Sep 7, 2013 -
Re: Dying To Live (Prologue)
Hi there! Let me just tell you that having this man's son in the car just about did it for me. I was seriously ready to cry when Eric died ...
Sep 6, 2013
