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  • Poetry » Realistic, Technology
    Re: I want to be like Google

    Hey Googlebot! I stumbled across this poem today and wow! It's amazing! I found literally no errors in the entire poem. After reading this, I won't be surprised if you ...

    Apr 12, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Romantic
    Re: Lovely Assassin Letters (5)

    Hey! For starters, thanks a lot for bringing a huge smile to my face today. When I saw this post in the Green Room, I started grinning from ear to ...

    Apr 12, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Technology
    Re: love letter to [CLICK HERE TO READ MORE]

    Hey! Wow! This is pure genius! (: The first time I got a NovelStar comment, I was flattered. When I checked for the link around two hours later, the message ...

    Apr 12, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror
    Re: Goodbyes

    Hey! This poem reminded me of a quote I had read a long time back. It went something like this: "There is an end in friend, a good in goodbye, ...

    Apr 12, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Other
    Re: numb

    Hey! First of all, lemme just say, wow! I think its amazing how you pulled off the transition from depressed to hopeful. A lot of people mess tend to mess ...

    Apr 12, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: It is what it is

    Hey! First of all, I loved the idea of your poem. In the midst of our fast-paced life, it is so easy to forget who we are and give in ...

    Apr 10, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Lyrical, Fantasy
    Re: Rain After a Drought

    Hey! I found the way you describe rain breathtakingly beautiful. Using nothing but words, you have painted a vivid picture. I really like how you use imagery to your benefit. ...

    Apr 9, 2021

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual
    Re: Speckles of emotion

    Hey! First of all lemme just say that I really enjoyed reading your poem. There's a slightly eerie air in the poem, like it is forcing us to confront the ...

    Apr 9, 2021

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Literature
    Re: Chapter 1- A New Fairytale

    Hey! First of all, I really liked the title of your story. "A New Fairytale" is apt for this tale. This is kind of random, but I also love your ...

    Apr 9, 2021

  • Poetry » Satire, Dramatic
    Re: Autobiography of a metal lock

    Hey! I really like the style of writing, and how you express the feelings of a metal lock. You've really given life to an inanimate object. I feel like the ...

    Apr 9, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health
    Re: Yes that's me

    Hey! For starters, I really liked how blunt you are. I've noticed that a lot of people (I plead guilty to this charge too! :) ) tend to exaggerate their ...

    Apr 8, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Tick, tick, tick

    Hey! First of all. lemme just say I loved your topic. I feel like its something everybody should wake up to. We all just have 24 hours a day. Those ...

    Apr 8, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Romantic
    Re: Lovely Assassin Letters (4)

    Hey! Wow! This letter was amazing! I really like your idea of Blake being an assassin, and how through his letters, you give him a human touch instead of making ...

    Apr 8, 2021

  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Science Fiction
    Re: The Wave

    Hey! For starters, I really liked your plot. Unlike most stories that sort of run along the same lines, this one is kind of different. I think there's a tiny ...

    Apr 7, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Romantic
    Re: Lovely Assassin Letters (3)

    Hey! For starters, lemme just say that I really liked this letter. I like how Amanda trusts Blake enough to believe that he would never hurt her. Now that's a ...

    Apr 7, 2021

My tongue must tell the anger of my heart, or else my heart, concealing it, will break...
— Katherine, The Taming of the Shrew