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Re: James
If I'm honest, horror stories aren't my forte. I'm more fantasy which is why perhaps I am not the best person to review this. Then again, I need to get ...
May 8, 2014 -
Re: Bad things happen in slow motion
Hello there manisha! I'm Niraco, how are you this fine morning? Anyway. lets move on to the reason I am actually here: reviewing! Much like what ScarlettFire said this was ...
May 2, 2014 -
Re: Mommy May I?
I know you perhaps intended this to be rather humorous but I found it to actually bring up a rather serious issue. The only thing I perhaps didn't like was ...
Apr 29, 2014 -
Re: I'm Drowning
Much like what @JayeCShore said this poem is rather simple and a dime a dozen. However, poems are an outlet which many writers show their real raw feelings. At first ...
Apr 29, 2014 -
Re: Amen
How I love haikus. They're so short and sweet and I could just read a million of 'em. Anyway, onto this review this fine afternoon. Religion I think is actually ...
Apr 23, 2014 -
Re: Marbles
Such a strange little poem you have here. The subject matter I have a hard time putting my finger on. The only thing I would complain about is the lack ...
Apr 23, 2014 -
Re: The Two Thieves - Prologue
Since I really don't know which fandom you're writing a fanfiction about I probably am lacking in some knowledge. That being said I felt that thing could have been a ...
Apr 4, 2014 -
Re: Lost
I really liked this piece. I especially loved how you had one or two word on their own, it really helps the poem to stand out. However, I think you ...
Apr 4, 2014 -
Re: All Blind
Hey there @BloodinkSeesFootage ! Little Niraco here with a review of your neat little poem today! We're all in love and totally fucked up by it blinded by it can't ...
Apr 4, 2014 -
Re: I fell in love with a boy in five inch heels
I really don't think I can say anything which hasn't already been said about this poem. It tugs right at the heart strings. And his American twang soothed my horrible ...
Apr 4, 2014 -
Re: i-m-p-o-s-s-i-b-l-e
Hey there @xDarkHeart27x ! @Niraco here with a little review for you today! I'd like to start off with something that bugged me about this poem before I start praising ...
Apr 4, 2014 -
Re: Articulation
Lets start off this review with your rather fitting title: 'Articulation'. Too be honest I had no idea what the words meaning was. I actually had to Google it. After ...
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: This Is War
Little story for you before I start the review - it doesn't have some relevance don't worry. The song 'This is War' by Sick Puppies was actually playing on my ...
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: Benches
Since this is very short then I'm afraid to say this review shall be rather short too. Normally short poems are something which I will flock to, but this just ...
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: Waiting
I really found myself enjoy this poem. Also a big thumbs up for me for having a rhyme. Whenever I see someone creating a rhyming scheme in their poem I ...
Mar 14, 2014
