Niraco

This actually reminds me a lot of a family member of mine. Once I told her this and she had trouble grasping the idea that it takes seven minutes. (This ...

I always felt that the opening line to any piece of writing is one of the most important things. Your opening: Wild, rapid movements, With which I express myself. There's ...

I enjoyed the tragic romance side of this poem. Very moving indeed. Like Little said before me the second half of the poem was a lot better than the beginning ...

I'm not very good at review haikus so please bare with me :D Moonlight on the pond Fish breaks through the flat surface A fly is dinner This poem was ...

I really loved the emotion and thought that has clearly been put into this poem. Your imagery was also very well done my favourite has to be: love's a lie, ...

This poem I found was very unique and unlike anything I had seen before. I must ask. What did you make a fan-fiction on? I couldn't tell. If I knew ...

I always tell myself that one of the most important things about writing is the opening line. It is what grabs a reader and draws them in. I must say ...

The way this poem was written is what struck me at first. I also thought that you were being far too hard on yourself. Your poem also expertly describes what ...

I really liked the way you tackled this subject matter. The scarlet drops of blood that we bleed matter just like you do. For me this was the most powerful ...

I really thought that amount of detail presented within this poem was something that I haven't seen before as poems tend to be rather short and lacking in such detail. ...

I can't say I know very much about music but that still didn't hinder my enjoyment of this poem. I could feel the happy emotion within this poem that was ...

I could feel a great amount of emotion and power inside this poem. It was just great to read and the words flowed ever so easily off the page - ...

This poem was unlike anything I have ever seen before and it blew my mind. I haven't ever seen a poem written in this fashion which was a clean breath ...

I rather enjoyed this poem despite the fact that it wasn't very original. My favourite lines would have to be: Made of Coal and soot, Where Satan's secrets lie, right ...

For a first attempt it's rather good. Darkness and chilling, Frightened screams and deathly jeers; Tell me of the end. I loved your word choice of 'deathly jeers'. I felt ...