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  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: All the things we never had

    Hey there! I saw this story and thought I should pop by and read it. I'll be frank with you, I skipped through this story a lot because it got ...

    Oct 22, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Die With Me

    Hey there! I haven't reviewed in a very long while, so I'll try. Reading the title, I thought it was going to be something cheesingly-romantic that I would die. But, ...

    Oct 22, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Ten Negative Signs That You're A Writer

    Hey Hei. What's up? So, reading this I realized... sadly, I am a Writer. I have a feeling you have some typos. When you wrote 'curios' I believe it should ...

    Aug 18, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Other Re: Kincade the Doctor?

    Hi! Merry Christmas in July! I'm your Secret Santa ;) I'm reviewing this and another story. Any corrections like spelling/grammar with be in BOLD . I will write comments. Kincade ...

    Jul 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: The Fading - Chapter One

    Hey Roundsquare! I'm here to review at your request. You'll notice marking throughout your story of corrections, and comments as well. CHAPTER ONE James didn't bother wiping his muddy ASICS ...

    Jun 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Days We Forget to Love- *Chapter One*

    Hello SparkOfDoubt!! I have not seen you in oh too long. How are you? Here's my short review, short being because this story was absolutely perfect that it did not ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: NEEDS A TITLE

    Hey there! I'm Nike, your reviewing Genie! Spelling/Grammar mistakes will be in bold. I will be commenting on part I do or don't like, and things that should be edited. ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Last Night I Dreamt That Somebody Loved Me

    Hey there! This was, wow, a good story. I felt the emotion, the power. It was immense. Though, I would love it if you emphasized the emotions that you got ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Madness

    Hello! I'm here to review. :) I posted your story into my review to show you the spelling and grammar mistakes that you had. Also, to point out good and ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Franny and Factual

    Why hello there. I'm Nike, nice to meet you and welcome to YWS! As I can see, this is your first story posted on here. I'll be reviewing. If you ...

    May 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A vivid dream

    You asked me to review so I am. Yay! Whe I first read tis, I'll be honest with you, I was not enthused by this. It didn't excite me, it ...

    May 8, 2013
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: Controlling Me No More

    Hello there. I haven't reviewed in forever, so bear this in mind, I might be a little sloppy right now. And there was an ant of my desk... ew. Here's ...

    May 7, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Romantic Re: The Delete Button

    When I first look at a piece of writing, I look at it's length. Sometimes I don't read the whole long piece because I am just a lazy person. But ...

    Mar 12, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Love and Lies: Chapter One

    I'm baaaaack. "KELSEY I sat at my normal seat in the diner. It was just a regular Tuesday night. Except this one felt different. When I turned around I knew ...

    Mar 11, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Love and Lies: Prologue

    Hello. When I was a child, I always always wanted to be a spy. But now, I still do. I usually watch movies about this not read books. The books ...

    Mar 11, 2013


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