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Re: All the things we never had
Hey there! I saw this story and thought I should pop by and read it. I'll be frank with you, I skipped through this story a lot because it got ...
Oct 22, 2013 -
Re: Die With Me
Hey there! I haven't reviewed in a very long while, so I'll try. Reading the title, I thought it was going to be something cheesingly-romantic that I would die. But, ...
Oct 22, 2013 -
Re: Ten Negative Signs That You're A Writer
Hey Hei. What's up? So, reading this I realized... sadly, I am a Writer. I have a feeling you have some typos. When you wrote 'curios' I believe it should ...
Aug 18, 2013 -
Re: Kincade the Doctor?
Hi! Merry Christmas in July! I'm your Secret Santa ;) I'm reviewing this and another story. Any corrections like spelling/grammar with be in BOLD . I will write comments. Kincade ...
Jul 13, 2013 -
Re: The Fading - Chapter One
Hey Roundsquare! I'm here to review at your request. You'll notice marking throughout your story of corrections, and comments as well. CHAPTER ONE James didn't bother wiping his muddy ASICS ...
Jun 14, 2013 -
Re: The Days We Forget to Love- *Chapter One*
Hello SparkOfDoubt!! I have not seen you in oh too long. How are you? Here's my short review, short being because this story was absolutely perfect that it did not ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: NEEDS A TITLE
Hey there! I'm Nike, your reviewing Genie! Spelling/Grammar mistakes will be in bold. I will be commenting on part I do or don't like, and things that should be edited. ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Last Night I Dreamt That Somebody Loved Me
Hey there! This was, wow, a good story. I felt the emotion, the power. It was immense. Though, I would love it if you emphasized the emotions that you got ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Madness
Hello! I'm here to review. :) I posted your story into my review to show you the spelling and grammar mistakes that you had. Also, to point out good and ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Franny and Factual
Why hello there. I'm Nike, nice to meet you and welcome to YWS! As I can see, this is your first story posted on here. I'll be reviewing. If you ...
May 18, 2013 -
Re: A vivid dream
You asked me to review so I am. Yay! Whe I first read tis, I'll be honest with you, I was not enthused by this. It didn't excite me, it ...
May 8, 2013 -
Re: Controlling Me No More
Hello there. I haven't reviewed in forever, so bear this in mind, I might be a little sloppy right now. And there was an ant of my desk... ew. Here's ...
May 7, 2013 -
Re: The Delete Button
When I first look at a piece of writing, I look at it's length. Sometimes I don't read the whole long piece because I am just a lazy person. But ...
Mar 12, 2013 -
Re: Love and Lies: Chapter One
I'm baaaaack. "KELSEY I sat at my normal seat in the diner. It was just a regular Tuesday night. Except this one felt different. When I turned around I knew ...
Mar 11, 2013 -
Re: Love and Lies: Prologue
Hello. When I was a child, I always always wanted to be a spy. But now, I still do. I usually watch movies about this not read books. The books ...
Mar 11, 2013
