Nightlyowl

Ok! So Nightlyowl here for a review. Now, I liked your voice in this, but I don't understand what you're actually writing about, and I don't understand why you changed ...

I really enjoyed this poem. It has been something I've thought of many times (and probably why I always stopped writing in my diaries. I've started many) But I do ...

Ok! So I'm here to give you a review! First thing's first. Re-read your post. There are quite a few typos here and grammatical errors. For instance: "I hear a ...

Hello, nightlyowl here! While I liked your idea, I don't think you executed it well. Your rhymes seemed forced, like the poem had an idea, but it shifted to suite ...

O.O Wow... That was... a terrible thought! Haha I drink a cup of coffee every morning and that leaves me with one hell of an image. Anyways! Onto the review ...

I really do like this story. I want to know what happens to Josh, who his father is, and all that. There were a few spots that could use some ...

Hi there, so I really liked this, you wrote it beautifully, the only thing I found, was that this stanza sounded... off. It didn't fit into the whole rhythm very ...

I think this is well written, however, I think it's cliche. No offense, but it sounds suicidal. Grant-it I have my own suicidal-ish cliched poems, which is why I can ...

I have no problem with the lack of punctuation or capitalization, I don't think poems need it, they can be written however the writer feels will best tell their story. ...

Hey, well I've read something else of yours! I really loved the imagery, your really good at creating a picture and sticking with it. The only thing I'd have to ...

I agree with Kitty on this. I was interested with the title and admired the fact that you had written about a homosexual couple rather than the normal heterosexual one. ...

Hi there! Nightlyowl here to give you a review! So I loved your piece, it was well written and, though short, gave a clear image which I loved. I would ...

This poem started out reminiscing about the past and as the reader you could feel the wistful affections for those times portrayed in the poem. I love how it started ...

This poem is very moving. I love the progression throughout a girl's life and how her relationship with her father changes through the years. Though I have not witnessed the ...

I love this poem, it goes with the saying you never know what you've got until its gone. I love how though you write this poem with clay being the ...