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Re: Collision
Hi EmilieHaugaard,have a good day, Oh my gosh,I loved your poem so much.The way you play with the words is just matching with the rtyhm.I like both stanzas and I ...
Jun 28, 2013 -
Re: Theater
Hi kittybee.Good day, I just take a deep breath when I read this poem!I watched your theatre about your life-your lover,your parents and anything you felt inside?Its quite a very ...
Jun 28, 2013 -
Re: Rewind
Hi yese,good day.I really love your poem!The rythm just flow slowly with a wonderful words you use to describe the meanings of life.The most favourate lines I loves is; 'Their ...
Jun 28, 2013 -
Re: My Angel
nice poem BlackFox,have a good day!I admit that there is some grammatic errors that you should fix it so that it would not affect the beautiful poem. "My Angel so ...
Jun 26, 2013 -
Re: His Control
Hi Reowine, I like your poem but the title seem to be not really suit with the 'body'.His( considered as a rat) does not show any attitude control of the ...
Mar 21, 2013 -
Re: Dead Flowers
Hi niteowl!good day I really like the way you describe the dead flowers in your own way to make it beautiful and creepy at the same time; 'parchment stained with ...
Jan 9, 2013 -
Re: Poem 1
Em,yeah.It's pretty scary on how you put the blood to represent the hurt and an unfulfilled dreams, and I have to think twice to get the means.Some poem can be ...
Jan 5, 2013 -
Re: Jack
It was nice to see when you are trying to show here about 'He'(Jack) and his friends(That was what I understand from your poem).The theme maybe about friendship that they ...
Jan 3, 2013 -
Re: Coastal Reality
I like your poem!For me it just like a lyric that i could sing along with my quiet difficult to understand but i believe there is so much means inside ...
Oct 22, 2012 -
Re: Best friend poem
Poem with the theme friendship will be always a nice and an amazing poem.Here i see the verity of your heart to your friend in a lines 3-8. " I ...
Oct 22, 2012 -
Re: To My Future Daughter
Simple but beautiful.I love it very much.when i read this poem,there is some kind of feeling i felt inside. Be grateful for each breath, "Each sniff of the nose, Each ...
Oct 18, 2012 -
Re: Into the Fog
Actually,this is a great poem.But when it come to the rhythm,something wrong with it.But never mind,it still wonderful for me. "Walk into the fog, Don't worry. Nothing will jump out ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: Past, Present, Future.
Hi,there.Here I come with my special review on your masterpiece!LoL Okay,actually this is a great poem.Wow.This is the beautiful poem I ever seen!The theme,and all the stanzas there are so ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: A Redneck Thanksgiving
Wow.This poem just like an old diary.I mean your poem are so amazing(full with historical moment).I like the way you put the funny situation on your poem, (e.g) *Most people ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Death is looking for me
Hiya there,based on your poem .'He' seems to be the 'angel of the death'.Okay,this poem is pretty awesome.And unique for me. I have been growing tired Of this *game of ...
Nov 24, 2011
